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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
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Life

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I wish everyone lives a colorful life. The diversity of happiness that you've described helps form such a lifestyle.
  

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Hello Jobb Here's my version: 'I wish everyone's life could be full of colour. ' MrP

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Hello Jobb

Here's my version:

'I wish everyone's life could be full of colour. All the different forms of happiness you've described would contribute to such a way of life.'

MrP
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I think "contribute to such a way of life" has depicted the thing exactly.
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