letters of motivation (urgent!!!)

0hi everybody! I have to write two letters of motivation for an academic admission. Can you please check what I've written? 02br
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00Thank you very much,02br
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00Andrea02br
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00p.s. Some passages are copied by other letters of motivation I found on this forum! I hope it won't be a problem....02br
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00To whom it may concern:02br
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00My name is xxx and I am completing a Bachelor’s Degree in Engineering Physics at 00. I am writing to you regarding the Master of Science in xxx starting in August 2007.02br
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00My interest for Physics applications and technology is something that embossed my whole personal growth and also my choice of education. During my time in the Engineering Physics Bachelor’s degree I feel that I have developed many of my knowledge and skills regarding physics and its applications. The programme of the course provided us with a broad knowledge in many different fields of physics, mathematics and modern technology, from both a theoretical and experimental point of view, so I firmly believe than my educational background fits perfectly with the requirements for your Master of Science. 02br
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00To be given the opportunity to study in a world-renowned and internationalized university is of great value to me. To be able to get in touch with professional researchers, exponents of the business and industry world is to me a concept of learning by doing which I am sure I will find a revealing experience. I believe that working in a research group or studying for a PHD would be the ideal prosecution of my student career, and I believe that KTH can offer me all that I need to fulfil my future plans. 02br
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00The opportunity of getting and providing feedback in terms of learning from people with another cultural background, I also see as important and very useful for detecting cultural blind spots and other cultural differences. During the university career I trained on working in group and studying independently I see this as an important lesson learned that I will apply on this Master and especially in the thesis project.02br
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00I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant in the 2007/2008 academic years. I am confident that I am qualified and prepared to meet all requirements of the application. I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favourable consideration. 00I look forward to launching my academic career. Should you have any questions, please contact me at 01a00Email Removed00">00(e-mail02a00 adress)02br
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00Sincerely,00 02br
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00To whom it may concern:02br
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00My name is xxx and I am completing a Bachelor’s Degree in Engineering Physics at 00. I am writing to you regarding the Master of Science in xxx starting in August 2007.02br
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00Problem-solving and system orientated thinking has always been one of my talents, and I have won awards to this effect. 00During the past three years, I gained a deep knowledge in physics, from both a theoretical and experimental point of view. The emphasis of my studies was understanding the fundamental physics principles that govern modern day technology. But I also learned about other different topics such as computer programming and technical writing. Besides these, I found the laboratory courses to be very interesting and exciting, because one of my career aspirations is to participate in an active research group within a leading university or private company.02br
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00To further my career aspirations, I want to obtain a Master's Degree in xxx. I chose this Master’s Program because it is perfectly aligned with my long-term plans. After I complete the program I intend to join a research group or apply for a PHD programme. I believe that your university with its sophisticated facilities, competent faculty and good studying environment would be an ideal place for me to pursue graduate studies and realize my career goals.02br
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00The opportunity of getting and providing feedback in terms of learning from people with another cultural background, I also see as important and very useful for detecting cultural blind spots and other cultural differences. During the university career I trained on working in group and studying independently I see this as an important lesson learned that I will apply on this Master and especially in the thesis project.02br
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00I hope that I will be accepted as an applicant in the 2007/2008 academic years. I am confident that I am qualified and prepared to meet all requirements of the application. I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favourable consideration.02br
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00Kindly contact me if you require any further details or documents. I hope to hear from you in the near future.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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