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Corie_nn Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Letter writting

Could anyone take a look at my short letter? Thanks a lot!

Hi, Dad:

You might be surprised by this letter as I am still away home on holiday. Actually I am writing asking for your urgent help. While I was touring a small town in France yesterday, I lost my wallet containing some cash and all credit cards. All I have now is a few ten-dollar notes I found in my pocket and I don’t think they will last long. As I am travelling all alone, I have no one to borrow money from. I still have three days to go because I really don’t want to cancel the rest of my trip which I have planned elaborately. Please mail me 500 dollars to the following branch. I’ll be paying you back as soon as I get home.
  

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Hi Corie; I hope it's not a true story! Hi, Dad: You might be surprised by this letter as I am still away from home on holiday. Actually I am writing asking for your urgent help.

  • Hi Corie; I hope it's not a true story!
  • Hi, Dad: You might be surprised by this letter as I am still away from home on holiday.
  • Actually I am writing asking for your urgent help.
  • While I was touring a small town in France yesterday, I lost my wallet containing some cash and all my credit cards.
  • ) bills (20-pound notes - British currency) I found in my pocket and I don’t think they will last long.
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Hi Corie; I hope it's not a true story!


Hi, Dad:
You might be surprised by this letter as I am still away from home on holiday. Actually I am writing asking for your urgent help. While I was touring a small town in France yesterday, I lost my wallet containing some cash and all my credit cards. All I have now is a few ten-dollar (Euro?) bills (20-p
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thanks a lot for your help!!

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