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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter writing to accommodation office
The following is a letter to a univeristy accmodation offier to ask for a new room. If you see any mistakes, can i have your comments?
First, I would like to thank you for your efforts in providing us safe and convenient dormitory environment. I really feel at home thanks to your good management. however I have a problem with my roommate.... I tried to solve the problems by talking with my roommate, but it was no use.
First, I would like to thank you for your efforts in providing us safe and convenient dormitory environment. I really feel at home thanks to your good management. however I have a problem with my roommate.... I tried to solve the problems by talking with my roommate, but it was no use.
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Please do not copy and paste text from a Korean wordprocessing software. It makes editing more difficult than necessary. Simply type in your text directly into the message box.
- Please do not copy and paste text from a Korean wordprocessing software.
- It makes editing more difficult than necessary.
- Simply type in your text directly into the message box.
- Your first two sentences are ludicrously ingratiating in English, and I have deleted them.
- Dear Mr [surname], I have a problem with my roommate: [state the nature of the problem in enough detail to make your request convincing] .
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Please do not copy and paste text from a Korean wordprocessing software. It makes editing more difficult than necessary. Simply type in your text directly into the message box.
Your first two sentences are ludicrously ingratiating in English, and I have deleted them.
Dear Mr [surname],
I have a problem with my roommate: [state the nature of the problem in
Your first two sentences are ludicrously ingratiating in English, and I have deleted them.
Dear Mr [surname],
I have a problem with my roommate: [state the nature of the problem in
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First, I would like to thank you for your efforts in providing us safe and convenient dormitory environment. I really feel at home thanks to your good management.
Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally in English? I am not sure how to say it in English.
Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally in English? I am not sure how to say it in English.
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Omit them from your letter. The residence office does not need or want to hear that. Just get to the point.
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