Letter writing help?

dear forum can somebody help me with bruishing up my letter?

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The netherlands

Hotel career centre
192 Old Christchurch road
Bouenemouth
England

6 March 2005

Dear sir / Maddam,

I am an 18-year-old girl and I would like to join one of your courses. I read your article in the news paper of 5 March 2005.

I would be most grateful if you could sent me a brochure and some information about the courses.

I am a pupil of the Havo and my nationality is Dutch. After my exams i would like to follow one of your courses and after that I would like to work in a hotel abroad or in a international hotel in the Netherlands.

Is there a possibility for me to join the cours becaus i am Dutch?

I thank you in anticipation and I look forwar to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

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rianne............


I thank you in anticipation and I look forward to hearing from you soon.