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Corie_nn Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Letter writing
could anyone correct this letter for me? Thanks a lot.
I have just heard the good news that your first baby, a lovely girl was born. I would sincerely like to congratulate you two on the arrival of your angel. I know that you have been wanting children for years and I’m so glad your dream comes true. With the baby joining you, I feel sure that you all will make an even happier family. I believe that the girl is definitely very pretty, just like her mother Lucy. Do you have any ideas of how you name her? Please tell me once you pick the name. How are the baby girl and the great mother Lucy? I bet she must be sleeping soundly in the nursery house. John, please take good care of Lucy and your little girl. I’ll go visit you as soon as possible. Can’t wait to see you all!
I have just heard the good news that your first baby, a lovely girl was born. I would sincerely like to congratulate you two on the arrival of your angel. I know that you have been wanting children for years and I’m so glad your dream comes true. With the baby joining you, I feel sure that you all will make an even happier family. I believe that the girl is definitely very pretty, just like her mother Lucy. Do you have any ideas of how you name her? Please tell me once you pick the name. How are the baby girl and the great mother Lucy? I bet she must be sleeping soundly in the nursery house. John, please take good care of Lucy and your little girl. I’ll go visit you as soon as possible. Can’t wait to see you all!
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corie_nn could anyone correct this letter for me? Thanks a lot. ) news that your first baby, a lovely girl was born.
- corie_nn could anyone correct this letter for me?
- Thanks a lot.
- ) news that your first baby, a lovely girl was born.
- ) like to congratulate you two on the arrival of your angel.
- I know that you have been wanting (Fine, but have wanted is more natural to my ear) children for years and I’m so glad your dream has come true.
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corie_nncould anyone correct this letter for me? Thanks a lot.
I have just heard the good (fantasic?) news that your first baby, a lovely girl was born. I would sincerely (Sincerely sounds very formal, whole-heartedly?) like to congratulate you two on the arrival of your angel. I know that yo
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Dear Dave Philips,
I think two of your sentences(corrected) read like this:
1. I know that you have been wanting (Fine, but have wanted is more natural to my ear) children for years and I’m so glad your dream has comes true.
I think 'has come' is correct. A
I think two of your sentences(corrected) read like this:
1. I know that you have been wanting (Fine, but have wanted is more natural to my ear) children for years and I’m so glad your dream has comes true.
I think 'has come' is correct. A
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Yes 100% correct, thanks for clarifying.
I haven't used the site recently and had forgotton that the strike out doesn't work. It shows when you do it but not when you post. I highlighted them to show that I had crossed them out, unfortunatly the screen everyone sees they are still there.
Thanks again.
DP
I haven't used the site recently and had forgotton that the strike out doesn't work. It shows when you do it but not when you post. I highlighted them to show that I had crossed them out, unfortunatly the screen everyone sees they are still there.
Thanks again.
DP
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Dave PhillipsYes 100% correct, thanks for clarifying.Now I know why the
I haven't used the site recently and had forgotton that the strike out doesn't work. It shows when you do it but not when you post. I highlighted them to show that I had crossed them out, unfortunatly the screen everyone sees they are still there.
Thanks again.
DP
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Thank you so much for your correcting work. I'm studying it and it's really helpful!
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