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Tony.Fer Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Letter writing

Dear Friends,.

'Lately, I got an enticing job offer, better salary, along with more benefits. Spurred on by this, i've chosen to leave my current and take up the new one'

I know its not good one. how can I improve it.

Thanks!!
  

Top answer

Why, if u know the salary good why are u quitng. Bye

  • Why, if u know the salary good why are u quitng.
  • Bye
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Why, if u know the salary good why are u quitng.
Any way if u are not interested in that job and interested in the one u are going fine.u can if that will please ur heart,it ok.Bye
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Tony.FerI know its not good one. how can I improve it.
Here is one possible revision.
I just got offered a job with a better salary and more benefits. It looks like too good an opportunity to pass up so I'm going to accept it.

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