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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Letter to University
Hi everyone! Please give me some advice and feedback about this letter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about my A level exams. I got 74 from Mathematics and 86 from both Lithuanian language and English language. Unfortunately, my IELTS is lower than I expected (Listening 6.5, Reading 7, Writing 5, Speaking 6 - overall band 6.0). I do not stay focused during the exam because the time was limited. This is the cause why the writing task is not good at all.
Despite these inadequacies, I still want to study at the University of XXX and hope that you will give me a chance. If so, I will try to improve my English during summer and then at the time of studies.
I look forward to your favourable reply and hope that my application will be taken into consideration again.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about my A level exams. I got 74 from Mathematics and 86 from both Lithuanian language and English language. Unfortunately, my IELTS is lower than I expected (Listening 6.5, Reading 7, Writing 5, Speaking 6 - overall band 6.0). I do not stay focused during the exam because the time was limited. This is the cause why the writing task is not good at all.
Despite these inadequacies, I still want to study at the University of XXX and hope that you will give me a chance. If so, I will try to improve my English during summer and then at the time of studies.
I look forward to your favourable reply and hope that my application will be taken into consideration again.
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Hi If your concern is about the format of the letter, do not worry. e; WHAT HAPPENED WHEN YOU APPLIED BEFORE- ACCEPTED OR REJECTED, AND REASON). I am writing to inform you about my A level exams.
- Hi If your concern is about the format of the letter, do not worry.
- e; WHAT HAPPENED WHEN YOU APPLIED BEFORE- ACCEPTED OR REJECTED, AND REASON).
- I am writing to inform you about my A level exams.
- I got 74 in Mathematics and 86 in both Lithuanian and English languages .
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Hi
If your concern is about the format of the letter, do not worry. There is nothing wrong, except that you have to include the following after u address your recepient:
Sub: Request to reconsider admission with regard to low IELTS score
If you concern is about the grammar in the letter, you can check what i think is correct, below:
YOUR NAME, YOUR DESIGNATION(i
If your concern is about the format of the letter, do not worry. There is nothing wrong, except that you have to include the following after u address your recepient:
Sub: Request to reconsider admission with regard to low IELTS score
If you concern is about the grammar in the letter, you can check what i think is correct, below:
YOUR NAME, YOUR DESIGNATION(i
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I hope you find my reply useful. I have underlined and italixed what I found to be the mistakes in the body of your letter. And good luck with your admission.
-Anirudh
-Anirudh
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