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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter to the clients

Hello dear all, ty that we have you Emotion: smile
Could you please help me to correct the e-mail we have to sent to our clients?
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Hello,

We regret to upset you with bugs you meat while using the system. We were thinking how should we help you not only to fix bugs but not to allow them happen.
The conclusion we agreed on is that we have to test the system thoroughly once again.
In the nearest future, our developers will start checking code, meanwhile I will check the functionality not to miss anything.
Hope this will help us to receive better system that will be more stable and trustworthy
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Thank you in advance Emotion: smile
  

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I made some corrections on the grammar of this letter, I hope it is helpful! Hello, We regret to have upset you with the bugs you met while using the system. We have been thinking about how should we help you to not only fix the bugs but also to not allow them happen.

  • I made some corrections on the grammar of this letter, I hope it is helpful!
  • Hello, We regret to have upset you with the bugs you met while using the system.
  • We have been thinking about how should we help you to not only fix the bugs but also to not allow them happen.
  • The conclusion we have agreed on is that we need to test the system thoroughly once again.
  • In the nearest future, our developers will start a checking code; meanwhile I will check the functionality so as not to miss anything.
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I made some corrections on the grammar of this letter, I hope it is helpful!

Hello,

We regret to have upset you with the bugs you met while using the system. We have been thinking about how should we help you to not only fix the bugs but also to not allow them happen.
The conclusion we have agreed on is that we need to test the system thoroughly once again.
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