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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

letter to the CEO

0Hi everybody,02br
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00Could you please check my letter and give me advice on how to improve it. The CEO has agreed to give us an airplane ticket but we need to write a formal letter first.02br
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00Thanks a lot 02br
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00"To the Chief Executive Officer02br
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00 Dear Sir, 02br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of XX Association.02br
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00We are a French association trying to raise funds. For that purpose we are organising a "loto" (that is to say a sort of "bingo", except that people are awarded prizes instead of cash), which will be held on April, XX, within the walls of our association. The benefits of the "loto" will be attributed to the XX Bureau, the aim of which notably being to pay for fieldtrips or any other school trips with pedagogical/educational purposes.02br
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00As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and could enable us to expect more people to turn up. This is why, we request from your generosity an airplane ticket from X to Y.02br
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00In exchange, we are willing to offer to your company something in return, under the form of advertising (billboards or anything else you may require). 02br
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00We very much hope that our expectations will be met by your services and would like to thank you in advance.02br
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00Looking forward to hearing from you02br
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00Kind regards "0-
  

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02br 02br 00We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association. We will present a game night, where prizes will be awarded to the participants. 02br 02br 00As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and would encourage more people to participate.

  • 02br 02br 00We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association.
  • We will present a game night, where prizes will be awarded to the participants.
  • 02br 02br 00As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and would encourage more people to participate.
  • 02br 02br 00Your name will be prominately displayed at the event as an official sponsor and you will be acknowledged in any public relations material.
  • 02br 02br 00We very much hope that we will be able to count on your contribution to our event.
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0To the Chief Executive Officer02br
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00 Dear Sir, 02br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of *** Association whose mission is 01i00________________________02i00.02br
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00We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association. We will present a game night,

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