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Letter Writing
letter to the CEO
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00 Could you please check my letter and give me advice on how to improve it. The CEO has agreed to give us an airplane ticket but we need to write a formal letter first. 02 br
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00 Thanks a lot 02 br
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00 "To the Chief Executive Officer 02 br
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of XX Association. 02 br
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00 We are a French association trying to raise funds. For that purpose we are organising a "loto" (that is to say a sort of "bingo", except that people are awarded prizes instead of cash), which will be held on April, XX, within the walls of our association. The benefits of the "loto" will be attributed to the XX Bureau, the aim of which notably being to pay for fieldtrips or any other school trips with pedagogical/educational purposes. 02 br
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00 As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and could enable us to expect more people to turn up. This is why, we request from your generosity an airplane ticket from X to Y. 02 br
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00 In exchange, we are willing to offer to your company something in return, under the form of advertising (billboards or anything else you may require). 02 br
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00 We very much hope that our expectations will be met by your services and would like to thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 Looking forward to hearing from you 02 br
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00 Kind regards " 0-
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00 Could you please check my letter and give me advice on how to improve it. The CEO has agreed to give us an airplane ticket but we need to write a formal letter first. 02 br
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00 Thanks a lot 02 br
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00 "To the Chief Executive Officer 02 br
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of XX Association. 02 br
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00 We are a French association trying to raise funds. For that purpose we are organising a "loto" (that is to say a sort of "bingo", except that people are awarded prizes instead of cash), which will be held on April, XX, within the walls of our association. The benefits of the "loto" will be attributed to the XX Bureau, the aim of which notably being to pay for fieldtrips or any other school trips with pedagogical/educational purposes. 02 br
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00 As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and could enable us to expect more people to turn up. This is why, we request from your generosity an airplane ticket from X to Y. 02 br
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00 In exchange, we are willing to offer to your company something in return, under the form of advertising (billboards or anything else you may require). 02 br
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00 We very much hope that our expectations will be met by your services and would like to thank you in advance. 02 br
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00 Looking forward to hearing from you 02 br
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00 Kind regards " 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association. We will present a game night, where prizes will be awarded to the participants. 02 br 02 br 00 As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and would encourage more people to participate.
- 02 br 02 br 00 We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association.
- We will present a game night, where prizes will be awarded to the participants.
- 02 br 02 br 00 As you may know, airplane tickets are attractive prizes and would encourage more people to participate.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Your name will be prominately displayed at the event as an official sponsor and you will be acknowledged in any public relations material.
- 02 br 02 br 00 We very much hope that we will be able to count on your contribution to our event.
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0 To the Chief Executive Officer 02 br
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of *** Association whose mission is 01 i 00 ________________________ 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association. We will present a game night,
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I am writing to you on behalf of *** Association whose mission is 01 i 00 ________________________ 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 We are holding a fundraising event which will be held on April, ***, within the walls of our association. We will present a game night,
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