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Tiff Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter to supplier

After visiting your website of great information on products your company carries prompted me to seek business opportunity ............... for your product to be represented in Korea.

Could someone help to make this sentence better ?
Tiff
  

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Hi, After visiting your website of great information on products your company carries prompted me to seek business opportunity ............... for your product to be represented in Korea. Could someone help to make this sentence better ?

— Clive

  • Hi, After visiting your website of great information on products your company carries prompted me to seek business opportunity ...............
  • for your product to be represented in Korea.
  • Could someone help to make this sentence better ?
  • I recently visited your website and saw all the great information on your company's products.
  • This has prompted me to seek the business opportunity to represent your company in Korea.
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Hi,

After visiting your website of great information on products your company carries prompted me to seek business opportunity ............... for your product to be represented in Korea.

Could someone help to make this sentence better ?

I recently visited your website and saw all the great information on your company's
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Hi Clive,
Thank you so much.
I have been cracking my head on this sentence for a day, you solved my problem.

Cheers!
Tiff
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Hi Tiff,

You're welcome.

Don't forget that two short sentences are often better than one longer, more complicated one.

Best wishes again, Clive
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