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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Letter to school

Dear Brista,

I don’t know what to say. I’m speechless and overjoyed and a whole bunch of other emotions all bundled up together right now! Joining the Air National Guard was definitely an important step in my life and I am very proud to be part of a cohesive unit that’s main objective is to protect our nation and the great state of California. But being accepted to UCR is indescribable! This is a dream come true and going to be elated for the whole year. I’ve tried so hard to get to the next level in school, but sometimes things just don’t work out the way you want it to. That doesn’t mean I’ve given up and today just proves that through hard work and perseverance dreams are achievable and I am so honored to be part of your institution! Thank you again for giving me this chance to be part of your school and I can’t wait to start at UCR!

Please someone look over this letter to UCR for me. Thank you! Feel free to add anything to make it sound more grateful and appreciated, because it just made my day...or year!!
  

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Dear Brista, I don’t know what to say. I’m speechless and overjoyed and a whole bunch of other emotions all bundled up together right now! Joining the Air National Guard was definitely an important step in my life , and I am very proud to be part of a cohesive unit that’s whose main objective is to protect our nation and the great state of California.

  • Dear Brista, I don’t know what to say.
  • I’m speechless and overjoyed and a whole bunch of other emotions all bundled up together right now!
  • Joining the Air National Guard was definitely an important step in my life , and I am very proud to be part of a cohesive unit that’s whose main objective is to protect our nation and the great state of California.
  • But being accepted to UCR is indescribable!
  • This is a dream come true , and I'm going to be elated for the whole year.
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Dear Brista,

I don’t know what to say. I’m speechless and overjoyed and a whole bunch of other emotions all bundled up together right now! Joining the Air National Guard was definitely an important step in my life, and I am very proud to be part of a cohesive unit that’s whose main objective is to protect o

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