I'm sorry, I don't understand what your question is. If you are asking if the above sentence is correct, it should read: We are offering our car wash services to X company, and would like to extend that offer to the Y department. But, I don't think you need to propose the service to a separate department in the same company if you are offering those services to the entire company.
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