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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter to propose our car wash service

we are offrering our service (car wash) to a company and woulod like to propose the same service to another department (dept in same company)
  

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I'm sorry, I don't understand what your question is. If you are asking if the above sentence is correct, it should read: We are offering our car wash services to X company, and would like to extend that offer to the Y department. But, I don't think you need to propose the service to a separate department in the same company if you are offering those services to the entire company.

  • I'm sorry, I don't understand what your question is.
  • If you are asking if the above sentence is correct, it should read: We are offering our car wash services to X company, and would like to extend that offer to the Y department.
  • But, I don't think you need to propose the service to a separate department in the same company if you are offering those services to the entire company.
  • " (Or, if you want to specify the rate in the proposal letter, you can do that.
  • But, it is probably better to use language leaving the rate open to negotiation.
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I'm sorry, I don't understand what your question is. If you are asking if the above sentence is correct, it should read:

We are offering our car wash services to X company, and would like to extend that offer to the Y department.

But, I don't think you need to propose the service to a separate department in the same company if you are offering those services to the entire compa

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