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Alive baloch Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter to my english language sir

hey guyz i am xxx and my english language is not 2 gud but i wanna improve my english so can some one help me about this letter........is there any mistake so u guyz should tell me.k

Bahnstrasse 73

5300 Bonn

Gemany

April 4th 2011

Hove International Institute

Queen's Road

Hove,East susex BN3 3RD

Dear Sir

I am writting to ask for information about TLM classes,when our class shifted to elementary level.

I am twenty one and i am student at beginner level and i dn;t wanna join this level class,i was fill the form to join elementary level but that class full of student and there are no space for me and magement told me u join beginner level and this class soon shifted to elementary level,and i dn't knw when class shifted to elementary level....cuz i haved 4 week in the same class

Plz send me information about my classes as soon as possiable

yours obiedently

XYZ
  

Top answer

Hi. When you write something in EnglishForward for us to correct, we will appreciate it if you do not use "texting" language. That language is OK for mobile phones, but not for formal writing.

  • Hi.
  • When you write something in EnglishForward for us to correct, we will appreciate it if you do not use "texting" language.
  • That language is OK for mobile phones, but not for formal writing.
  • These are not English words: wanna, cuz, u, plz .
  • The word "I" is always capital.
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Hi.

When you write something in EnglishForward for us to correct, we will appreciate it if you do not use "texting" language. That language is OK for mobile phones, but not for formal writing.

These are not English words: wanna, cuz, u, plz.

The word "I" is always capital.
Sentences begin with a capital letter.

Also, check the spelling of your wo

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