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Vincent tee Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

letter to management. please help if you can. thanks

Hi English Gurus,

The below letter in blue will be sent to my management later. Could you help me to fix my grammar and english sentences as I am poor in my english. Thanks alot!!!

Hi Albert,

As from our short discussion last month regarding helping on the support team, I would like to take this opportunity to contribute my current expertise to assist the team.

I am confidence enough to make my own research to deliver quality services from the scope I have not tapped, while at the mean time waiting for my company to send me for BW Training for upgrading the necessary skills that would contribute to the team even more.

I would like to provide a multi skill services by contributing my web expertise for the project team and at the same time helping the support team to solve BW issues.

Your kind respond will be much appreciated.

With regards,
Vincent
  

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Hi Vincent, Here is a revised version: Hi Albert, Per our discussion / conversation 1 last month regarding my participation on the support team, I would like to inform you that I am glad and ready to contribute my web expertise. Even though I have not completely known the work details, I can certainly research on my own and deliver quality services. After I finish the BW Training provided by my company, I believe I can further help the team resolve BW issues / solve BW problems .

— Hoa Thai

  • Hi Vincent, Here is a revised version: Hi Albert, Per our discussion / conversation 1 last month regarding my participation on the support team, I would like to inform you that I am glad and ready to contribute my web expertise.
  • Even though I have not completely known the work details, I can certainly research on my own and deliver quality services.
  • After I finish the BW Training provided by my company, I believe I can further help the team resolve BW issues / solve BW problems .
  • 1 I am (eagerly) 2 looking forward to your favorable response.
  • Respectfully yours, Vincent 1.
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Hi Vincent,

Here is a revised version:


Hi Albert,

Per our discussion / conversation1 last month regarding my participation on the support team, I would like to inform you t
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Are you sending this as a letter sent by post or as an e-mail?

If a letter, then Dear Albert.
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Feebs11Are you sending this as a letter sent by post or as an e-mail?

If a letter, then Dear Albert.
Hi Feesb,

Thanks for catching the casual tone! In fact, Hi does not go well with Respectfully yours either by post or as an e-mail.

Hoa Thai
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