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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter to introduce my company, please help
I would like to have help to know if this letter is to wordy, I've been trying to make the message about my company clear and easy to understand, but I am still not to happy with the result. Help please, I am totally desperate
Welcome! We are ** COMPANY NAME**, we provides top quality Spanish Translation services at excellent rates. We translate from Spanish to English and English to Spanish.
Our broad experience in translations have been helping companies to extend their business across cultures by improving communication with their customers making clear the message through the information in their written documents We are offering high quality language translations by native speaking qualified translators. In fact the innate knowledge of a native speaker assures that the translation will be easily understood by its audience and convey the tone and emphasis of the original document.
Our Translation Services are composed of the following:
Documents are edited and proofread at no extra charge. Competitive rates without compromising the quality of the translated documents and fast turnaround at no extra costs. Translation discounts for non-profit Organizations and first-time clients.
Please do not hesitate to contact us to discuss how we can together increase business in Spanish-speaking markets for your company.
Sincerely,
Welcome! We are ** COMPANY NAME**, we provides top quality Spanish Translation services at excellent rates. We translate from Spanish to English and English to Spanish.
Our broad experience in translations have been helping companies to extend their business across cultures by improving communication with their customers making clear the message through the information in their written documents We are offering high quality language translations by native speaking qualified translators. In fact the innate knowledge of a native speaker assures that the translation will be easily understood by its audience and convey the tone and emphasis of the original document.
Our Translation Services are composed of the following:
- General documents: Translations of Letters, Brochures,
Handbooks, Invitations, Newsletters, Articles, E-Mails, And Faxes. - Technical: Translation of Manuals, Guides, and Instructions.
- Marketing: Translation of Websites, Business
Cards, Posters, Power Point Presentations, Labels, CD / DVD / Book Covers, and
Other Types of Marketing Documents
Documents are edited and proofread at no extra charge. Competitive rates without compromising the quality of the translated documents and fast turnaround at no extra costs. Translation discounts for non-profit Organizations and first-time clients.
Please do not hesitate to contact us to discuss how we can together increase business in Spanish-speaking markets for your company.
Sincerely,
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Anonymous I would like to have help to know if this letter is to wordy, I've been trying to make the message about my company clear and easy to understand, but I am still not to happy with the result. I agree with you - there are mistakes in the English grammar which would not give potential clients the confidence that your services are perfectly reliable. There is a lot of repetition and run-on sentences.
- Anonymous I would like to have help to know if this letter is to wordy, I've been trying to make the message about my company clear and easy to understand, but I am still not to happy with the result.
- I agree with you - there are mistakes in the English grammar which would not give potential clients the confidence that your services are perfectly reliable.
- There is a lot of repetition and run-on sentences.
- It is not well-structured.
- Will it be in the form of a flyer, a paper letter, email or web page?
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AnonymousI would like to have help to know if this letter is to wordy, I've been trying to make the message about my company clear and easy to understand, but I am still not to happy with the result.I agree with you - there are mistakes in the English grammar which would not give potential clients the confidence that your services are perfectly reliable. Th
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