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Kag Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

?? Letter to expel child from day care? only child...properly written??

0Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brady:02br
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00As the Director and Owner of Tiny Tots Day Care, I appreciate the time and effort you spent carefully selecting a day care provider for your child, Brett.02br
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00After reviewing the safety guidelines of the center; wanting to ensure all children who attend are provided with the utmost care; I have reason to be concerned for the welfare of the children at the daycare regarding these issues in the past two months:02br
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00 1. Children regularly being scratched, hit, and having their hair pulled02br
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00 2. Six children have been bitten; one serious enough to require stitches02br
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00 3. Teachers have even reported being kicked02br
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00Despite several conferences with you, who are genuinely concerned about your son, I am sorry to say I have seen no improvement in the addressed behavior. Therefore, for the safety concerns listed above, the decision seems obvious to expel your child from Tiny Tots Day Care.02br
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00I have been very impressed with your ability to remain reasonable throughout this situation. I wish you the best of luck in the future with your child. 02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00Ken Gjkldjf02br
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00Owner/Director02br
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00Tiny Tots Day Care0-
  

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02font 02br 00Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brady:02br 02br 00 As the Director and Owner of Tiny Tots Day Care, I appreciate the time and effort you spent carefully selecting a day care provider for your child, Brett.

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  • 02font 02br 00Dear Mr.
  • and Mrs.
  • Brady:02br 02br 00 As the Director and Owner of Tiny Tots Day Care, I appreciate the time and effort you spent carefully selecting a day care provider for your child, Brett.
  • 01font 00However, we have been experiencing problems with his behaviour.
  • The following have all been matters of concern: 02font 02br 00 1.
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0 01font00I think you must insert somewhere at the start that the issues of behaviour are those relating to Brett, and then link this to the examples given.02font02br
00Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brady:02br
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00 As the Director and Owner of Tiny Tots Day Care, I appreciate the time and effort you spent carefully selecting a day
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0 Thank you for the response!!! I understand, and greatly appreciate your revisions!!! Thanks again! KAG 0-
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0Good day!Teaching kids in a pre-school level is very though job.You need lots of patient and understanding.As we all know that kids have different behaviour thats why we should always take care of them.As a teacher you must set as a good example to them.treat them just like your own children.They need lots of attention and they must be loved.Show your cocern to them just like their family.The s
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if only plagiarism wasn't against the rules, oh how i'd love to use this. I believe we are using the same book. Writing that works.
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Wow, I have the EXACT same assignment for my Professional Writing class! I totally wish plagarism was allowable because this is a great letter. It does give me some ideas to work with as far as layout goes, thanks so much for the post.
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