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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter to Employer

Would much appreciate if you could give me some advice on this letter.



Dear Mr. XXX

Just want to drop you a note to thank you personally for your kindness, being very supportive and patience (tolerance) that you extended on me. I'm so blessed to be part of your team and working for you. Your leadership and ability to get things done are impressive to me. and really help make the team outstanding. We couldn't do it without you ................. now I'm worry what will happen after you gone !!!



May God bless you more graces in life and to your family as well.

Best wishes,

Yuk


  

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See if this version sounds good to you. I try to eliminate unnecessary words and make the sentences flow better. Dear Mr.

— TrysB

  • See if this version sounds good to you.
  • I try to eliminate unnecessary words and make the sentences flow better.
  • Dear Mr.
  • ***, [comma] I just wanted to thank you personally for your kindness and patience and for being so supportive of me.
  • I feel very blessed to be working for you as a part of your team.
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See if this version sounds good to you. I try to eliminate unnecessary words and make the sentences flow better.

Dear Mr. ***, [comma]
I just wanted to thank you personally for your kindness and patience and for being so supportive of me. I feel very blessed to be working for you as a part of your team. Your leadership and ability to get things done are impressive and really make our
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