Hello,
I am writing a letter to a Swedish embassy to arrange a meeting with the ambassador and I would like to make sure some of the expressions I used are polite and correct enough:
1. We wish to kindly inquire you about the possibility of our organising a meeting with her Excellency [name].
2. In terms of a convenient date, we remain entirely at her Excellency's disposal.
Also, how do you feel about the ending phrase:
We will be honoured to see/have our invitation accepted.
Thank you for any response.
Anonymous 1. We wish to kindly inquire you about the possibility of our organising a meeting with her Excellency [name]. Anonymous 2.
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Anonymous1. We wish to kindly inquireyouabout the possibility of our organising a meeting with her Excellency [name].
Anonymous2. In terms of a convenient date, we remain entirely at her Excellency's disposal.
Very formal and nothing wrong with that!
The ending you're thinking of is grammatically sound