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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Letter to bank

I hope this is a better written letter than the last one. I'm still in the process of editing the letter to counselor, but please if you have time, take a look at this letter and help me organize and proofread it. Thanks! It's a letter of great importance, because it's personal and I'm very broke...

Dear Owen Ignacio,
I am writing this letter per your request. While I was traveling in Africa last year in 2011, I had my personal belongings stolen from me. The things that were stolen include, my wallet, all my credit cards, business cards, my passport, airline tickets, laptop computer and other miscellaneous items. Since the incident there has been a couple charges that are not associated with me and only one of them has been resolved. There was a $407.31 charge for a DL HOWARD JOHNSON PARK SUDAN that has now reappeared on my account and I don’t understand why, because I wasn’t even in that part of the country(Africa) while I was vacationing. The only city I visited were Congo and Johannesburg, so there was absolutely no way I could have used my card at that particular hotel. I cannot give you a solution to this predicament, because there are just too many possibilities as to how someone could easily forge my signature and illegally use my passport as their own for personal gain. Hope this letter will finally help us resolve the situation at hand. Thank you very much for your time and patience. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
  

Top answer

PreciousJones; It is best to make business letters very short. Give all the necessary details, such as your account number and the transaction details. State clearly what you want.

  • PreciousJones; It is best to make business letters very short.
  • Give all the necessary details, such as your account number and the transaction details.
  • State clearly what you want.
  • Good luck!
  • A- s Dear Owen Ignacio, I am writing this letter per your request.
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PreciousJones;

It is best to make business letters very short. Give all the necessary details, such as your account number and the transaction details. State clearly what you want.
Good luck!
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AlpheccaStarsSince the incident there has been a couple of charges to my account that are not associated with me and only one of them has been resolved.
Shouldn't it be "there have been a couple of charges"

I didn't reach a phone until 48hrs after the incident, but I guess it was too late, because a week later the charges showed on my online ac
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PreciousJonesShouldn't it be "there have been a couple of charges"
Yes, I missed that one!

In the US, if you report your stolen cards within 3 days, you do not have to pay for any fraudulent charges, especially if the charges were made after you reported the theft.

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