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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter to a former employer, about come back - please correct:)
I want to write letter to my employer from last summer holidays, I want to come back to this place.
I know that it's not too formal, but it's the intention, i dont want it to be too official, just to inform in a loose way, that I willingly return to this job if there is a chance.
Can you please correct grammar/style or make some suggestions?
Hello T,
It's D.L., I worked as a waiter at Tre Scalini last year, I hope you remamber me.
I'm going to come back to Philadelphia soon, with some new skills and experience. So if you need any floor staff, you can count on me. I will be ready to rejoin Tre Scalini team with pleasure.
I will be available from June 28th, as soon as I arrive and organize myself, I will call, step by for a litlle chat and to see how everybody's doing.
So for now, I just want to let you know, that there is somebody who will be glad to come back to the old spot.
Best Wishes
Thanks!
I know that it's not too formal, but it's the intention, i dont want it to be too official, just to inform in a loose way, that I willingly return to this job if there is a chance.
Can you please correct grammar/style or make some suggestions?
Hello T,
It's D.L., I worked as a waiter at Tre Scalini last year, I hope you remamber me.
I'm going to come back to Philadelphia soon, with some new skills and experience. So if you need any floor staff, you can count on me. I will be ready to rejoin Tre Scalini team with pleasure.
I will be available from June 28th, as soon as I arrive and organize myself, I will call, step by for a litlle chat and to see how everybody's doing.
So for now, I just want to let you know, that there is somebody who will be glad to come back to the old spot.
Best Wishes
Thanks!
Top answer
Hi, I think this is a good letter. You're smart to contact your employer in advance of your arrival. I'll make a few suggestions.
- Hi, I think this is a good letter.
- You're smart to contact your employer in advance of your arrival.
- I'll make a few suggestions.
- , I worked as a waiter at Tre Scalini last year, (period instead of comma) I hope you remamber (rem e mber) me.
- I'm going to come back to Philadelphia soon, with some new skills and experience.
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Hi,
I think this is a good letter. You're smart to contact your employer in advance of your arrival. I'll make a few suggestions.
Hello T,
It's D.L., I worked as a waiter at Tre Scalini last year, (period instead of comma) I hope you remamber (remember) me. I'm going to come back to Philade
I think this is a good letter. You're smart to contact your employer in advance of your arrival. I'll make a few suggestions.
Hello T,
It's D.L., I worked as a waiter at Tre Scalini last year, (period instead of comma) I hope you remamber (remember) me. I'm going to come back to Philade
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