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Asghar Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter of Thanks for sparing time to meet

0 I need experts input to polish this letter of thanks. You have liberty to modify or change. Thanks. 02br
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00Dear Dr. xyz, 02br
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00On behalf of TES Comapny, I would like to convey my sincere indebtedness for the valuable time you lent me to introduce myself and apprise you of our capabilities and capacities. 02br
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00With your help and cooperation I am confident that TES will be successful in becoming one of the best local engineering company of Nigeria. We will always recognize your part in making this happen. 02br
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00Meanwhile, I invite you to visit our facility and assess yourself. Should you feel convenient on Thursday, June 2nd, 2005 at 11:30 AM we shall be pleased to receive you. The timing can be changed to your convenience. 02br
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00Yours truly, 02br
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0 Welcome, asghar. 02br 02br 00I have made few suggestions for alterations to your letter, but I have tried to preserve your "voice" 02br 02br 00Dear Dr. xyz, 02br 02br 00 I write on behalf of the TES Company to express our indebtedness to you for taking time to meet me, and for giving me the opportunity to apprise you of our Company and its work.

  • 0 Welcome, asghar.
  • 02br 02br 00I have made few suggestions for alterations to your letter, but I have tried to preserve your "voice" 02br 02br 00Dear Dr.
  • xyz, 02br 02br 00 I write on behalf of the TES Company to express our indebtedness to you for taking time to meet me, and for giving me the opportunity to apprise you of our Company and its work.
  • 02br 02br 00With your help and cooperation I am confident that TES will be successful in becoming one of the best local engineering companies in Nigeria.
  • We will always recognize your part in making this happen.
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0 Welcome, asghar. 02br
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00I have made few suggestions for alterations to your letter, but I have tried to preserve your "voice" 02br
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00Dear Dr. xyz, 02br
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00 I write on behalf of the TES Company to express our indebtedness to you for taking time to meet me, and for giving me the opportunity to apprise you of our Company
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0 Thanks Abbi 1948 for your comment, definitely there is an improvement in the letter content. 0-

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