Letter of request

Topic: You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university. Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course. Here are some points to consider:
- Why you are writing the letter
- Which course it is and when you plan to study
- Why you want to study this course

Dear Mr/Mrs,
I have recently become interested in online courses and am planning to register one of yours. Hence, I would be most grateful if you could provide me with more details concerning your online education.

I am a freshman majoring in English but I found that there are still a variety of weaknesses about English skills, especially listening ability, which I have to tackle as soon as possible. That is the reason why I decide to make inquiries about your English listening course. Particularly, I am hoping that you could supply more information about the exact time of lessons as well as the total number of hours of the course which I am planning to enroll. As far as I concerned, most students choosing the correspondent course often get fed up with this, as well as usually be distracted and easily give up after a period of time. Thus, what tips should I take to be more tremendous concentration, self-discipline and time management skill? In addition, apart from studying and doing exercises enclosing in your lessons, I wonder whether I should get other kinds of available learning materials. If so, which reliable listening sources should take into consideration?

Furthermore, I intend to apply your English listening lesson this summer, because the level of the next semester will increase its difficulties; therefore, I need to master this skill to make sure that I can no longer scare of this and easily become proficient at it.

Your e-learning curriculums are believed to be costly effective and flexible schedule, so I can save my money and have time-management, as well as balance doing part-time jobs and learning. Listening skill is considered as the most essential ability nowadays; therefore, the more skillful I get at listening, the more self-esteem I become when communicating with foreigners. Most important of all, I can have opportunities to go abroad or become an exchange student learning in other countries. Additional, it will become easier when I apply for the professions relating to English. Specifically, not only I can boost other skills but I also can spend time learning the second language.

I look forward to hearing from receiving your reply as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,
Trang
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