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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of recommendation for Master in UK
Hello!!!
I wrote this letter of recommendation, could anyone correct and comment it please?!
Especially the first and second paragraph....
Thank you very much,[Y]
Simon
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To Whom It May Concern:
As Head of the Chair of Economics at X University, I am writing with great pleasure to recommend (Name) for admission to the postgraduate program at Y University. I taught (Name) myself during the course "Microeconomics" for four months, and worked with him for eight weeks while he wrote his bachelor thesis. Through these experiences, I have come to know (Name) very well.
(Name) is an excellent scholar, with superior and disciplined learning skills. His understandings in the field of modern Economic thoery are extraordinary. I was impressed by his abbility to solve complex problems. While most of his peers could only replicate theories from textbook samples, (Name) usually approached the solution in innovative ways by consulting recent publications and journals.
When (Name) wrote his bachelor thesis on “Topic of bachelor thesis” at my chair, I was impressed by the creativity and dedication he approached this task with. He managed to solve the vast majority of the problems he encountered by himself and generally needed very little support. His thesis projected a detailed picture of the German electricity market.
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I have no doubt that (Name) ’s brightness, dedication, and social competence will contribute positively to your program. I sincerely recommend (Name) as a student and wish him all the best in his future endeavours.
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I wrote this letter of recommendation, could anyone correct and comment it please?!
Especially the first and second paragraph....
Thank you very much,[Y]
Simon
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StartFragment>
To Whom It May Concern:
As Head of the Chair of Economics at X University, I am writing with great pleasure to recommend (Name) for admission to the postgraduate program at Y University. I taught (Name) myself during the course "Microeconomics" for four months, and worked with him for eight weeks while he wrote his bachelor thesis. Through these experiences, I have come to know (Name) very well.
(Name) is an excellent scholar, with superior and disciplined learning skills. His understandings in the field of modern Economic thoery are extraordinary. I was impressed by his abbility to solve complex problems. While most of his peers could only replicate theories from textbook samples, (Name) usually approached the solution in innovative ways by consulting recent publications and journals.
When (Name) wrote his bachelor thesis on “Topic of bachelor thesis” at my chair, I was impressed by the creativity and dedication he approached this task with. He managed to solve the vast majority of the problems he encountered by himself and generally needed very little support. His thesis projected a detailed picture of the German electricity market.
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I have no doubt that (Name) ’s brightness, dedication, and social competence will contribute positively to your program. I sincerely recommend (Name) as a student and wish him all the best in his future endeavours.
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Top answer
personal preference) Dear Sir or Madam: As Head of the Chair (I would think you would be either the Chair or the Head, but not Head of the Chair, but I could wrong. ) of Economics at X University, I am writing with great pleasure to recommend (Name) for admission to the postgraduate program at Y University. I taught (Name) myself during the course "Microeconomics" for four months, and worked with him for eight weeks while he wrote his bachelor thesis.
- personal preference) Dear Sir or Madam: As Head of the Chair (I would think you would be either the Chair or the Head, but not Head of the Chair, but I could wrong.
- ) of Economics at X University, I am writing with great pleasure to recommend (Name) for admission to the postgraduate program at Y University.
- I taught (Name) myself during the course "Microeconomics" for four months, and worked with him for eight weeks while he wrote his bachelor thesis.
- Through these experiences, I have come to know (Name) very well.
- (I tend to blast adverbs and adjectives if possible.
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To Whom It May Concern: (not keen on this style any longer...personal preference)
Dear Sir or Madam:
As Head of the Chair (I would think you would be either the Chair or the Head, but not Head of the Chair, but I could wrong. You know your position better than I do.) of Eco
Dear Sir or Madam:
As Head of the Chair (I would think you would be either the Chair or the Head, but not Head of the Chair, but I could wrong. You know your position better than I do.) of Eco
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