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Tazeri Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of recommendation check
0 Hi everybody, 02 br
00 this is my first letter of recommendation. As I'm not a native speaker I would be really glad if somebody could help me with proofreading and general correction... 02 br
00 Thanx! 02 br
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00 To whom it may concern: 02 br
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00 X.Y. has been with our companies marketing department for a year. X.Y is one of the largest producers of medical equipment and hygiene products in the 00 . X is taking part in a paid internship program as a Brand Manager trainee. As her manager she is directly accountable to me. 02 br
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00 X is responsible for provisions to advertising campaigns and management of promotional materials such as leaflets and product brochures. She was also in charge of developing and capitalizing for some of our new product launch packs. During her work she proved to be creative and responsible. Her field of study has empowered her to offer very useful tips and recommendations concerning our media activities. For example her rating analysis of radio stations has helped us to choose right station and time to reach our target group with advertisements. 02 br
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00 Practical theory development within research methods has enabled X to comprehensively prepare surveys and questionnaires for our customer briefs. Last research task X was involved in was our regional mystery shopping project focused on pharmacies. X responsibilities were creating the questionnaires for our mystery shopping agents, general administrative support for the whole project and final processing of the obtained data. 02 br
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00 As I’ve outlined above X’s stay within our company has been extremely beneficial to both parties. She is a valued asset to our company. Although we would be sorry to see her go I realize X is a very ambitious young lady and therefore I understand her intentions to carry on with her studies. I wish her all the best in her future endeavours and recommend her with no hesitation for your postgraduate 00 Mass Communications programme at the 00 . 02 br
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00 If you have any questions concerning my recommendation or require further information on X 00 ’ 00 s 00 work performance, please don’t hesitate to contact me. 02 br
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00 Best regards, 02 br
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00 this is my first letter of recommendation. As I'm not a native speaker I would be really glad if somebody could help me with proofreading and general correction... 02 br
00 Thanx! 02 br
02 br
00 To whom it may concern: 02 br
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00 X.Y. has been with our companies marketing department for a year. X.Y is one of the largest producers of medical equipment and hygiene products in the 00 . X is taking part in a paid internship program as a Brand Manager trainee. As her manager she is directly accountable to me. 02 br
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00 X is responsible for provisions to advertising campaigns and management of promotional materials such as leaflets and product brochures. She was also in charge of developing and capitalizing for some of our new product launch packs. During her work she proved to be creative and responsible. Her field of study has empowered her to offer very useful tips and recommendations concerning our media activities. For example her rating analysis of radio stations has helped us to choose right station and time to reach our target group with advertisements. 02 br
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00 Practical theory development within research methods has enabled X to comprehensively prepare surveys and questionnaires for our customer briefs. Last research task X was involved in was our regional mystery shopping project focused on pharmacies. X responsibilities were creating the questionnaires for our mystery shopping agents, general administrative support for the whole project and final processing of the obtained data. 02 br
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00 As I’ve outlined above X’s stay within our company has been extremely beneficial to both parties. She is a valued asset to our company. Although we would be sorry to see her go I realize X is a very ambitious young lady and therefore I understand her intentions to carry on with her studies. I wish her all the best in her future endeavours and recommend her with no hesitation for your postgraduate 00 Mass Communications programme at the 00 . 02 br
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00 If you have any questions concerning my recommendation or require further information on X 00 ’ 00 s 00 work performance, please don’t hesitate to contact me. 02 br
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00 Best regards, 02 br
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00 Ing. A.B. 0-
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0 Hi tazeri, and welcome to the forums. , or if she coordinated their delivery. It's a big difference, but I can't tell from your description.
- 0 Hi tazeri, and welcome to the forums.
- , or if she coordinated their delivery.
- It's a big difference, but I can't tell from your description.
- 02 br 02 br 00 To whom it may concern: 01 b 00 There is a lot of discussion about the use of this phrase.
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0 Hi tazeri, and welcome to the forums. 02 br
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00 It's not clear if X actually created the advertising campagns, wrote the leaflets and brochures, etc., or if she coordinated their delivery. It's a big difference, but I can't tell from your description. 02 br
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00 To whom it may concern: 01 b 00 There is a lot of discussion about the use of this
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00 It's not clear if X actually created the advertising campagns, wrote the leaflets and brochures, etc., or if she coordinated their delivery. It's a big difference, but I can't tell from your description. 02 br
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00 To whom it may concern: 01 b 00 There is a lot of discussion about the use of this
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0 Hi Grammar Geek, 02 br
00 wow that was quick. Thanx a lot! 02 br
00 But I'm really amazed, great forum. 02 br
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00 wow that was quick. Thanx a lot! 02 br
00 But I'm really amazed, great forum. 02 br
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