Letter of recommendation

Hello everyone! My teacher told me to compose a letter of recommendation on her behalf and so I did...only that I'm pretty sure that it has some mistakes. So...can someone please help me correct it? thanks in advance

RECOMMENDATION

Mady is one of the students of the third year. Ever since the beginning she easily made herself noticed due to her passion for foreign languages, showing a special concern for Chinese language and culture through the knowledge she has gained from the lectures.
Currently, during lectures, she is very active, showing great interest in both practical and theoretical content. She masters character writing and she pays particular attention to translation excercises, key concepts and to composing essays in Chinese based on the studied topics.
Mady has shown a real interest in the Chinese literature course by composing a well defined portofolio and great documented essays.
The progress that she has made in her Chinese studies and her wish to improve and extend her Chinese language knowledge as well, allow me to believe that she will treat every taken action with earnestness and responsibility like she already does in the educational process at university. Therefore, I am entitled to believe that a scholarship in the P.R. of China represents the perfect opportunity through which this student can increase/improve considerably her linguistic competences. Thus, she can become a skilled specialist in the sinological field. I therefore strongly recommend her for obtaining this scholarship.