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Erfolg Posted 17 years ago
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Letter of motivation (please help)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm a new member in this forum. I'm from a country which English is not spoken widely. I want to apply for a number 1 university in my country and I want to use English. I'm running out of time and I must collect it on Tuesday. Please check if there is any mistake in my motivation letter. Here it is:
UNIVERSITAS **
Faculty Medicine
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student of ** and I would like to apply for Undergraduate (S1) program in The Regular Class of Faculty Medicine at Universitas ** through PPKB. I am interested in this program because I want to learn more about biology's application in human body since biology is my favorite subject. So, I can help other people gaining good health with affordable cost.
Being accepted in Universitas ** through PPKB is not something easy, but I always see an opportunity positively. I study hard everyday to fulfill my dreams to study in Universitas **. Having been a high rank student since my first year, I believe I'm appropriately qualified. Moreover, I have a good background in science, especially biology and chemistry. I enjoy learning about human body because it makes me realize that human only know a little about nature's secret and we must explore much more. I have the drive, determination and energy to succeed. I am willing to commit to the time and dedication needed to complete the study.
To find a suitable university with my strong passion in **, I collected some information from the internet and had a consult with ex-student of my school. From them, I know Universitas ** is a number 1 university in ** especially in the field of medicine. Here, student will find interested and satisfaction from teaching qualifications, perfect program, and international degree. By those things, I believe I can get a good future and career.
I very hope that by my above-said words, I will be accepted into Univertas ** in the Faculty Medicine through PPKB. I would be most grateful if you could give my application form in your most favorable consideration.
Yours faithfully,
**
UNIVERSITAS **
Faculty Medicine
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student of ** and I would like to apply for Undergraduate (S1) program in The Regular Class of Faculty Medicine at Universitas ** through PPKB. I am interested in this program because I want to learn more about biology's application in human body since biology is my favorite subject. So, I can help other people gaining good health with affordable cost.
Being accepted in Universitas ** through PPKB is not something easy, but I always see an opportunity positively. I study hard everyday to fulfill my dreams to study in Universitas **. Having been a high rank student since my first year, I believe I'm appropriately qualified. Moreover, I have a good background in science, especially biology and chemistry. I enjoy learning about human body because it makes me realize that human only know a little about nature's secret and we must explore much more. I have the drive, determination and energy to succeed. I am willing to commit to the time and dedication needed to complete the study.
To find a suitable university with my strong passion in **, I collected some information from the internet and had a consult with ex-student of my school. From them, I know Universitas ** is a number 1 university in ** especially in the field of medicine. Here, student will find interested and satisfaction from teaching qualifications, perfect program, and international degree. By those things, I believe I can get a good future and career.
I very hope that by my above-said words, I will be accepted into Univertas ** in the Faculty Medicine through PPKB. I would be most grateful if you could give my application form in your most favorable consideration.
Yours faithfully,
**
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