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CoffeeholicA Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter of motivation - HR coordinator

I would really appreciate if someone could read my letter and give me some suggestions how to improve it. I am applying for a HR position and as I don't have any previous experience I wanted to point out my other skills that I thought would be welcomed in this profession. The position I am applying for consists of providing administrative and operational support to expatriates who move into my country.
Thank you for your time!

Dear Sir or Madam,

As a highly motivated individual who loves new challenges I would like to apply for the position of overseas assignments coordinator.

Being former expatriate myself, I fully understand unique personal and professional challenges working abroad brings and how important it is to have dedicated HR support in the process. I strongly believe that my organizational and problem solving skills would maximize your employees’ performance by letting them focus on their assignments rather than worrying about non-work related issues in a foreign country.

Working in customer service industry has helped me to build strong interpersonal skills and to communicate in a diplomatic and professional manner. Offering assistance was not only a vital part of my job, but something I thoroughly enjoyed doing. Therefore, this position would give me an excellent opportunity to help my co-workers and have a positive impact on their expatriate experience.

As a part of multicultural and multinational group in my previous role, I learned to adjust quickly and to appreciate different perspectives my colleagues brought to the team. Believing that bringing our differences makes the business stronger is something I greatly agree with and value about your organization.

Joining a global company like XXX whose work culture embodies inspiration, challenge and diversity would help me reach my full potential and gain valuable experience.

This being said I look forward to hearing from you and meeting you in person. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,
XY
  

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Dear Sir or Madam, As a highly motivated individual who loves new challenge s, I would like to apply for the position of overseas assignments coordinator. Being As a former expatriate myself, I fully understand the unique personal and professional challenges working abroad brings and how important it is to have dedicated HR support in that situation. the process.

  • Dear Sir or Madam, As a highly motivated individual who loves new challenge s, I would like to apply for the position of overseas assignments coordinator.
  • Being As a former expatriate myself, I fully understand the unique personal and professional challenges working abroad brings and how important it is to have dedicated HR support in that situation.
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  • I strongly believe that with my strong organizational and proble m-s olving skill s, I would maximize be able to effectively provide the support your employee s need performance by letting and allow them to focus on their core tasks and assignments rather than without having to wor ry ing about non-work related peripheral work issues in a foreign country.
  • Working in the customer service industry has helped me to build strong interpersonal skills and taught me how to communicate in a diplomatic and professional manner.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

As a highly motivated individual who loves new challenges, I would like to apply for the position of overseas assignments coordinator.

Being As a former expatriate myself, I fully understand the unique personal and professional challenges working abroad brings and how important it is to have dedicated HR support in that situat
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Thank you teechr!! Really appreciate it!
Just one last question, would it be better if I start my introduction with: I am a highly motivated individual who loves new challenges and would like to apply for the position of overseas assignments coordinator; because most of the paragraphs start with "as"?
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Yes, that would be better.

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