Letter of Motivation for Facility Management

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00my name is thorben and i come from Germany. This year I want to start study International Facility Management in Netherland. For the application form I need to write an Letter of motivation. I have a lot of motivation but I don't know how to write that down. I started with the following:02br
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01b00My Motivation02b02br
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00international Facility Management,02br
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00at Groningen.02br
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00I live in xxx since my birthday together with my mother, father and brother. Here I passed my A-levels in 2003. In 2000/2001 I spend a year in the USA and went to Highschool there. That year was a big turn in my life. I became more selfconfident and independent. Since then I’m more open towards other people. Furthermore I’m very interested in new cultures and countries. I’m always looking for new challenges. 02br
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00What do you want to do for a living? Since my childhood I have been asking myself this question. I was always interested in economic subjects. Therefore I decided to study something that has to do with this subject. This is the reason why I started a two-year apprenticeship at ExxonMobil in 2004 to become a Business Specialist for Industrial Production and Sales. 02br
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00As I look back I can say, this was the right decision. Due to the fact that I finally know what I want to do in the future – Facility Management. During my apprenticeship I got to know a company from it’s „inside“. And in this time I realized that need more than just a...02br
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00Is this way of writing a letter of motivation ok??? Or should I start all over again??? It would be great if you can give me some advice or suggestions how to write this letter.02br
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00Thanks in advance,02br
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00thorben0-