Letter of motivation for double degree in France

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Letter of Motivation

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to apply a double degree program in tourism and hospitality management that offered by Sahid Institute of Tourism in cooperation with University D’Angers France. My career ambition is to become a tour / hotel manager, and eventually owner of a prestigious International hotel / tour where I can interact with and assist foreign travelers. I feel challenged to help travelers feel at home away from home and to help create a pleasant memories and experiences.

I graduated from one of a boarding high school that gains reputation from its strong emphasis on national values and military – like disciplines, in addition to exceptional academic and leadership achievements. I studied a special subjects which are not taught elsewhere to people in their age, namely Leadership, Nationalism and National Defence besides the national curricula / curriculum. I feel that my experiences will be great as an asset to your school as the education I will receive.

Learning at aFrenchUniversityis very important to me. I am eager to experience the creativity, independence, and energy that French put forward into their studies and work. Living and integrating with multilingual people in order to develop my language is also one of my reasons to study inEurope. And I wish to develop knowledge and skills in tourism management to be able to lead the future development of tourism in my country. I believe that a double degree program from Sahid Institute of Tourism and University D’Angers France can give me the necessary expertise to achieve these goals.

On my personal side, I enjoy new challenges and working with people. And I always had an interest in learning new culture and meeting new people. Since my school years, I took part in various traditional dance contests and represented my school in many events such in -- public, national television andPresidentPalaceinJakarta.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your positive acceptance.

Sincerely yours,

Fani Octora