Letter of Motivation Event Management

Hey muss bis am Donnerstag meinen LEtter of Motivation einreichen!
Hatte bereits einen geschreiben aber dnan ist mein pc abgennippelt musste jetzt im akkord nen neuen shreiben,bitte um Korrekturen...
Danke euch allen vielmals!!!

Letter of Motivation

Dear Madams and Sirs,

I am hereby applying for entrance to the International Event-Management program for the fall 2008 term.

I chose this program because of my interest in managing events and being around with many people,who also follow the same dream.
Moreover I love talking in English, and I also had been spending the last year working and travelling abroad and improved my English as much as I could. As though it is a perfect combination, which the......offers.

I always wanted to do something where I can organize, travel and meet new people with the same attitude. My goal is it to study and work international, which the IuoAS provides as they have a lot of exchange students from all over the world.

In my former High school I had been working on projects organizing events and I found it quite interesting and forced myself to learn more about Event-management. I had always be the person organizing parties,events and even parades. As my father works for a big company which is often present at congress I loved to hang around there and inform myself. I have never been the best in school, but I know what I want to do now, especially after the last year, when I used to work in different industries and also different countries.
It opened me new spaces and taught me do force myself studying Event-management.

I heard about your university quite a while before and thought, that this university would perfectly fit me to achieve the goals I have. And because of your associates in leading business industries it is a very good recommendation for future projects.

I hope to be a good student and satisfy me future teachers as though I hope to satisfied as well.

Yours sincerely