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LoveDave Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of Motivation - could someone have a read-through please?
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00 I am currently enrolled at a course of studies that doesn't fit my needs and am looking for a different one. However, the university I want to enroll at is a small one and chooses their students well. Furthermore, I would need to start mid term, my current course of studies does not entirely match theirs, so they will have to well consider if they're gonna take me or not... 02 br
00 I thus will need a really strong letter of motivation, without any grammar mistakes on top of it. If someone could read through it, check on mistakes and give me some feedback on what I could do better or which points I could elaborate on, I'd be eternally thankful. Cheers 05 0 02 br
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00 Dave 010id 1
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00 I am currently enrolled at a course of studies that doesn't fit my needs and am looking for a different one. However, the university I want to enroll at is a small one and chooses their students well. Furthermore, I would need to start mid term, my current course of studies does not entirely match theirs, so they will have to well consider if they're gonna take me or not... 02 br
00 I thus will need a really strong letter of motivation, without any grammar mistakes on top of it. If someone could read through it, check on mistakes and give me some feedback on what I could do better or which points I could elaborate on, I'd be eternally thankful. Cheers 05 0 02 br
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0 Ok, as I cannot copy and paste my letter nor attach it as a word document and since it is rather urgent, I will now re-type it. 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br 02 br 00 I researched the courses in business administration nationwide, using the internet, other students' opinions, in-depth talks with student advisors in both Osnabrueck and Gelsenkirchen, and finally a conversation with one of your staff, Mr. 02 br 02 br 00 I am 29 years old and have been traveling for most of the past ten years.
- 0 Ok, as I cannot copy and paste my letter nor attach it as a word document and since it is rather urgent, I will now re-type it.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br 02 br 00 I researched the courses in business administration nationwide, using the internet, other students' opinions, in-depth talks with student advisors in both Osnabrueck and Gelsenkirchen, and finally a conversation with one of your staff, Mr.
- 02 br 02 br 00 I am 29 years old and have been traveling for most of the past ten years.
- Initially my interests were in self development, paired with a strong fascination for my surroundings.
- Working in a team, or playing in a team, for that matter, has always been my approach to problem solving.
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0 Ok, as I cannot copy and paste my letter nor attach it as a word document and since it is rather urgent, I will now re-type it. If nothing else, I'll improve my typing skills that way... 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I researched the courses in business administration nationwide, using the internet, other students' opinions, in-depth talks
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I researched the courses in business administration nationwide, using the internet, other students' opinions, in-depth talks
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