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Pouaal Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter of motivation: can you correct me?

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00Dear00 Mr. [Name]02br
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00I am a French student in the ENSPG (The Grenoble National Engineering School for Physics) – INPG (Grenoble Institute of technology), a 501sup00th02sup00 year-degree school. I am in 401sup00th02sup00 year-degree. I found your laboratory on the [University] website and I want to realize a training period between June 4th and September 1401sup00th02sup00, 2007 in your research physics laboratory.02br
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00Condensed matter physics is very interesting. Moreover, your project “Microwave properties of superconductors” corresponds exactly to what I want to learn. Indeed, superconductors are fascinating: firstly by their null resistance but more by the expulsion of magnetic fields. Investigate the microwave properties of superconductors by finding information about the nature and the properties of the electron pairing would be exciting for me. Furthermore, I would like to work in your laboratory in order to learn more with the trade of researcher. Indeed, I hope to become researcher later.02br
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00My formation gives me serious 401sup00th02sup00 year degree knowledge with courses like electromagnetism, solid-state physics, physics of material and other fundamental physics courses.02br
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00I join you my CV, a letter from my school and a general documentation about my school. Note that the letter from my school is dedicated to an industry, but it could be also sent to a laboratory in a foreign country.02br
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0Dear 01b 00Dr. Smith:02b 02br 02br 00I am a 01b 00fourth-year02b 00 French student 01b 00at 02b 00the ENSPG (The Grenoble National Engineering School for Physics) – INPG (Grenoble Institute of 01b 00T02b 00echnology), a 01b 00500-year02b 00-degree school. 02br 02br 01b 00I am particularly interested in c02b 00ondensed matter physics01b 00, and02b 00 your project01b 00 on the m02b 00icrowave properties of superconductors corresponds exactly 01b 00to the kind of research I wish to pursue02b 00.

— Mister Micawber

  • 0Dear 01b 00Dr.
  • Smith:02b 02br 02br 00I am a 01b 00fourth-year02b 00 French student 01b 00at 02b 00the ENSPG (The Grenoble National Engineering School for Physics) – INPG (Grenoble Institute of 01b 00T02b 00echnology), a 01b 00500-year02b 00-degree school.
  • 02br 02br 01b 00I am particularly interested in c02b 00ondensed matter physics01b 00, and02b 00 your project01b 00 on the m02b 00icrowave properties of superconductors corresponds exactly 01b 00to the kind of research I wish to pursue02b 00.
  • 01b 00S02b 00uperconductors are fascinatin01b 00g for 02b 00their null resistance01b 00 and their02b 00 expulsion of magnetic fields01b 00, and investigating02b 00 the microwave properties of superconductors01b 00 by exploring02b 00 the nature 01b 00and properties02b 00 01b 00of electron02b 00 pairing would be exciting01b 00 and challenging02b 00 for me.
  • 02br 02br 00My p01b 00rogram has to date prepared me with02b 00 knowledge 01b 00from02b 00 course 01b 00work including02b 00 electromagnetism, solid-state physics, physics of 01b 00materials02b 00 and other fundamental physics courses.
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0Thanks for your correction. I've modified a lot of sentences.02br
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