letter of motivation

hi cud i please get some help wid my letter. any comments wud be greatly appreciated
Admissions Office
Lebanese University
Faculty of Sciences I
Hadath
July 4th, 2012

Dear Mr/Mrs,

I am applying to your Master II program in Biomems. This program is a concrete step to my PhD studies and my further research in the biomems field.

I am a M1 Biomedical Physics student at the Lebanese University, Faculty of Sciences I. I have majored in Physics in my undergraduate studies at the Lebanese University, Faculty of Sciences II in Fanar.

I have great leadership skills and excel in preparing and presenting presentations which I have been credited by two of my doctors, who were participating in my undergraduate project, and by my instructor in my lab course this semester. During my studies, I have obtained a lot of knowledge of the human anatomy and physiology and on the signals which can be detected and read from the human body. I have also obtained analysis and problem solving skills. I have excelled in computer programming, being the first in my class and excelled in electronics’ courses which require logic.

I want to continue my study at your prestigious university because of your outstanding educational system, focus on gathering relevant work experience, and your excellent facilities. The domain of Biomems is widely expanding across the world and the control of materials at the micron and nanometer scale has the potential to revolutionize the study of biological systems and the treatment of disease and this motivates me to participate in such a vast and growing field.

I am confident that I will bring a high level of energy and enthusiasm to your program. I am sure to exceed your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal. I will enrich the program by enabling fellow students and professors to benefit from my ambitious and open nature.

Finally, I ask you to thoughtfully study my application and thank you in advance for your consideration of my admission and look forward to your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,
John Saliba