Letter of motivation

Please, help me smbd!!! I wrote letter of motivation and I need a checking!! Pleaase!!! I havent got enough time!!! Thank u so so so so so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Dear Sir or Madam,<



I am applying to you to Bachelor program called “Management and economics” at the Otto-Von-Gueiricke University of Magderburg for the 2011/2012 winter term.<

It will be hard to evaluate me by myself and to explain why I would like to study in this university, but I will try to do it as perfect and interesting as I can.<

Firstly, I would rather to start with the question “why?”. In my family I am a single child and like various single children I always got what I wanted whatever it would be. But six years ago I realized that life is not simple as I thought. And responsibility which I had not got is very important. Since that time I wanted to build my own life without helping from parents. I knew I can to do it even if it would demand a huge number of energy and affords. My first step to the way of successful and responsible life is international education. I skimmed a lot of web sites of various universities from all countries and got advices from different people and I founded that university, which could help me for achieving my aim. It was the Otto-Von-Gueiricke University of Magderburg, Germany. This university has a wonderful history, a great number of departments and respectable membership of professors. But the most attractive point for me was the supporting of international students and possibility to study subjects in English first year. It helps to adapt to the life in the country with absolutely different mentality. It is so hard to study in Otto-Von- Gueiricke University brushes my doubts away.<

Moreover, I would like continue with the question” Who am I?”. As I noticed, it will be complicated but possible. In 2009 year I graduated in the gymnasium of the global education ? . I always took part in various Olympiads of different subject and was publicated in the city newspaper since I was eleven old. There is no doubt that school gave me an inestimable experience, but music school in which I have been studying of playing violin and piano during 5 years gave n\me a huge spiritual values.<

Two years ago I entered in for Engineering and Economics to the chemical department but which closely connected with economics. I put up my candidature for the senior-student immediately because it gives the experience in responsibility which is so necessary for student. Similarly, I took part in international various conferences in economics and chemistry. It develops my knowledge in different aspects and these knowledge I can put in to practice.<

My last and the main question “why me?”. I had a lot of thoughts and it is the most difficult part of my letter, but I can surely respond on it. Firstly, I was born like versatile person. In the same time I am interested and really understand advanced math and I write articles on various topics. I’m fond of sport games and playing violin and piano. May be it is usual but I has one specific: I have never back down. If I have a goal I will achieve it and I am proud of that quality.<

Thank you for considering my application. I hope I will not disappoint you. I look forward to Your acceptance.<

Sincerely Yours, Maria Ananenkova