Letter of motivation

hello,

to study abroad I need a letter of motivation, but my english is not very good at the moment. So I would be very grateful if somebody can read the text I wrote and give me some advices what I can make better.

Dear Sir or Madam,

since my early childhood it was an important concern to me to be helpful and deferential always towards other people and the nature. Already early in my school years I tried to solve conflicts and problems. I decieded to became be trained, for example, for the pupil's quarrel mediator or took part as an elective youth council actively in the creation of my town district. In this time I have learnt that a thorough knowledge helps to understand connections and so many problems can be avoided or are solved.

In my opinion, the people never had before in the history the possibility, as far as to decorate her living conditions passing like today. Besides, a menacing situation has already originated from ignorance or indifference whose coping of global strains needs and the world community puts before big political, but also technological challenges. I would like to serve with pleasure to find solutions for sustainable forms of the good production and the everyday life. So I have decided on a study of the environmental technology.

To study abroad for some time the possibility would offer me to get to know the approach of other nations to this topic.

In summer 20 XX I have received as a trainee in Max-Planck institute in XXX in the department from Dr. XXX an exciting insight into the world of the research. There one of the doctoral candidates told me about his positive experience during his exchange in XXX colleges in XXX.

Also on the web site of the college projects described, as for example XXX sound very interesting and the good abscission in international rankings put out for me the special charm to study for some time in XXX.

Beside him get on in the study, I want to improve my English knowledge in particular in the technical area. To be able to follow the lectures well I read English-speaking technical literature at the moment .

With a linguistic stay in the year 20 XX in XXX and several visits by my aunt who works in XXX I have received the first impression of the English culture and life-style. I enjoyed the time always very well and I would live with pleasure a longer time in XXX.
Moreover, from a study abroad I hope to attach contacts and friendship to students from other countries. For reasons demonstrated here I would be glad if you allow to me a study in XXX in XXX.