0Could you please overlook my modest trial of writing a letter of motivation? If you want i can also post my german trial! Unfortunately i am not a native speaker... Please help me its quite urgent! Thanks a lot!02br 02br 00Letter of Motivation02br 02br 00 02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam02br 02br 00 02br 02br 00My name is00 00X.X. At the moment I’m going to the 1201sup00th02sup00 grade of a private school in M..02br 02br 00My00 00principal courses are geography and german. I was born on the 1201sup00th02sup00 may 1988.02br 02br 00I would like to participate in a eight monthly practical course in Kathmandu.02br 02br 00Especially I am interested in the field of social work, because I take pleasure in being occupied with children, preferred in he age of 3 to 10 years and I want to live my creative part while innovating the games, constructing and painting.02br 02br 00The field of social work has woken up my interest, because I could imagine to be in the employ of00 00this field and for example to be00 00engaged for a world relief organization.02br 02br 00Due to the fact that I am very flexible I would also be ready to take car of small teaching works in the fields of English, german or Spanish.02br 02br 00Furthermore I am very interested in the culture and religion of Nepal.02br 02br 00It would be great if some children of my age would be member of my host family.02br 02br 00Desirable would a host family, living in the near of my practical course place.02br 02br 00I believe the communication00 00with other people is not very difficult for me ,because I am very open, urging for knowledge and sociable.02br 02br 00I don’t have any problems with other customs or way of lives, for I am very adaptable.02br 02br 00For my stay I am hoping a expansion of my horizon and to give rise to something positive.02br 02br 00Of course I would not only learn something by other people, but also get to know more about myself.02br 02br 00I dispose of linguistic knowledge in Englisch, French, as well as basic knowledge in Spanish.02br 02br 00In my opinion I am a very tolerant human, who stands up for people in the need and at any time ready to help.02br 02br 00I think I am good for a foreign work.02br 02br 00If I have awoken your interest,please don’t hesitate to contact me02br 02br 00Kindest Regards,02br 02br 00X.x02br 02br 00 02br 02br 00I0-
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X. This is a very unusual opening line and not even necessary one. Your name is known from the CV as well as the from the address.
— Kathrin
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This is a very unusual opening line and not even necessary one.
Your name is known from the CV as well as the from the address.
There is no need to introduce itself in a formal letter.
My name is ..
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0 1) My name is X.X. This is a very unusual opening line and not even necessary one. Your name is known from the CV as well as the from the address. There is no need to introduce itself in a formal letter. My name is .. is for writing to potential friends, strongly informal. I would suggest to take it back, it could lead to a tradegy:_)02br 02br 002) At the moment I'm going..
I am a Nepali boy born in 29th June 1988. It was really interesting to read this letter of motivation. I was happy to know that the writer is interested in Kathmandu, Nepal, thats where my hometown is. I would be really happy if I could meet the writer and talk to him. I would certainly be happy to help him letting him know about the culture of Nepal. But I am really desperate that I could I get i
well your motivation letter is good just arrange it in paragraphs.well...what u are coming to kathmandu...o r in kathmandu at this date I think...well i wrote in because I belong to kathmandu.so good luck with your social works here in kathmandu and hopefull you will like our place.