Letter of motivation

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00could anybody help me to correct my letter of motivation??? 02br
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00Thanks a lot.02br
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00Marek02br
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00Letter of motivation:02br
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00With this letter I would like to state my interest in an internship in your company.02br
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00After I finished my apprenticeship to an electrican of energy and my military service by the German Navy in 2001, I started to study electrical engineering with the main focus business technics at the University of Applied Science in Aachen/ Germany and at the Hogeschool Zuyd in Heerlen/ Netherland. My study is a combination of 70% electrical engineering and 30% business administration. At the end of the study I get to degrees, one from the University of Apllied Science in Aachen (Dipl.-Ing.) and one from the Hogeschool Zuyd in Heerlen (Ing.).02br
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00During my study I worked for serveral companies in different divisions. 00 00So I worked for 2 years at the Fraunhofer Institut for production technology 00 00in the division of technologymanagement. Thereby I had the chance to learn many thinks about new innovative processes in the field of production technology. Now I am working for 2 years by the city council in Aachen in the department of facility management. My field of activity is the whole field of energy management like energy controlling or structal engineering measures for cost reductions.02br
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00By the use of an internship in your company I would realise00 00my theoretical00 00knowledge. Your company having my full interest, because Philips is one of the biggest companies for electrical engineering worldwide. Not only my international study in Germany and in Netherland will be interesting for you also my good knowledge in electrical engineering and business administration can be interesting for you. 02br
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00I want to do an internship in the field of electrical engineering with a background of business administration.02br
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00The internship is a part of my study at the Hogeschool in Heerlen and after the internship I am ready to write my diploma thesis. I want to start the internship in august this year. The lenght of the internship is 100 days. 02br
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00I am looking forward for a personal speech to you and I hope we could find an interesting topic for an internship.02br
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00For detailed information please look on my Cv or on my website 02br
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00„www.***.de“02br
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00Yours sincerly,02br
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00Marek ***0-