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Fisherman6378 Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
letter of intent to rent space in mall
please help me correct the letter below its a copy paste change but am still nervous about it the guys i am sending the letter to are super huge massive co-operate guys here in india (ps: they build airports)
Dear Mr Isaac,
Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to signify our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall.
We are a new company established in 2014. Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices. We intend to sell our juices at Rupees 20 and Rupees 25 respectively. Our clients are not limited to any age group.
The Auto Beverage cart that we plan to put up would require at least 3 square meters per cart and a power outlet for a cash register, a small chiller, and the juicer. Each beverage cart would be manned by two employees.
This is our first venture in putting up a branch inside a mall. Please find attached
1. Photos describing Operation including Garbage Disposal.
2. Information on health benefits of Sugarcane and Coconut
3. FAQ’s on the carts
4. Menu
Keeping in mind the summer season, We believe that our beverage cart complements the business concept of your food court because we cater to the same target market and the food court has a limited beverages to offer. Thus, we would appreciate it if you could contact us at xxxxxxxxxx during office hours from Mondays to Thursdays, so we can set up a meeting to discuss this further and possibly come up with a formal business agreement.
Dear Mr Isaac,
Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to signify our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall.
We are a new company established in 2014. Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices. We intend to sell our juices at Rupees 20 and Rupees 25 respectively. Our clients are not limited to any age group.
The Auto Beverage cart that we plan to put up would require at least 3 square meters per cart and a power outlet for a cash register, a small chiller, and the juicer. Each beverage cart would be manned by two employees.
This is our first venture in putting up a branch inside a mall. Please find attached
1. Photos describing Operation including Garbage Disposal.
2. Information on health benefits of Sugarcane and Coconut
3. FAQ’s on the carts
4. Menu
Keeping in mind the summer season, We believe that our beverage cart complements the business concept of your food court because we cater to the same target market and the food court has a limited beverages to offer. Thus, we would appreciate it if you could contact us at xxxxxxxxxx during office hours from Mondays to Thursdays, so we can set up a meeting to discuss this further and possibly come up with a formal business agreement.
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Corrections are in red: Dear Mr Isaac, Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to express our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall. We are a new company established in 2014. Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices.
- Corrections are in red: Dear Mr Isaac, Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to express our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall.
- We are a new company established in 2014.
- Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices.
- We intend to sell our juices at Rupees 20 and Rupees 25 respectively.
- Our clients are not limited to any age group.
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Corrections are in red:
Dear Mr Isaac,
Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to express our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall.
We are a new company established in 2014. Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices. We intend to sell our juices at
Dear Mr Isaac,
Auto Beverages would like to present this Letter of Intent to express our interest in leasing a commercial space inside One Mall.
We are a new company established in 2014. Our products include a variety of flavored fresh tender coconut water and sugar cane juices. We intend to sell our juices at
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yup this really helps but am still not confident enough to send the letter , i request if it would be possible for you to write up something new to guide us
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fisherman6378, i request if it would be possible for you to write up something new to guide usWe do not write letters for you. If you post your draft, we will review it.
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