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Povesen Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of intent for Masters
Hi guys!
I realize it may be asking a lot and you probably get heaps of these, but I'll try my luck anyway.
I am applying for a Master's education starting in September and am writing a letter of intent. However, this is the first time I've ever had to write one of these. I addition, English isn't my first language so I'd really appreciate any and all input, even just a quick glance
Here goes:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I wish to apply for the Master’s degree in International Business and Entrepreneurship at University of Anonomity. I am applying for this program because I believe it to be an ideal match with my aspirations of pursuing a career within international management consulting and entrepreneurial endeavors. I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
My avid interest in entrepreneurship and management originates with my practical work experience along with working on various hands-on teamwork projects during my studies, acting both as consultant for Danish companies as well as taking on entrepreneurial endeavors. Several of the projects were highly commended by both lecturers and clients, with two of them receiving the mark A+. My academic background counts a Bachelor’s degree in business development from Aarhus University, Denmark, and I am currently pursuing a Master’s degree in technology based business development also at Aarhus University. Both educations have an interdisciplinary character and seek to combine technological insight with business acumen and entrepreneurship to form new business opportunities and processes. On top of my academic achievements I have worked with development of new processes and business initiatives at Siemens Wind Power. Presently I am employed as an intern at Logica IT Consulting, where I function in the role of project manager, charged with marketing planning and strategic proposals for a future business unit. Furthermore, with reference to my CV, I can state that I have strong analytical skills and a logical strain of thought, which enables me to quickly analyze and solve complex and ambiguous problems.
While my academic background provides me with technical and interdisciplinary knowledge fit for a project manager, it lacks dedicated business and entrepreneurial subjects along with cross-cultural competencies. This I why courses like International Entrepreneurship & Innovation, the international management courses along with the International Management Solution project fit perfectly with my aspirations. Furthermore I can personally identify with the programs values, such as personal initiative, responsibility and adapting to your environment, all of which I have actively cultivated by attending personal development lessons and workshops as well as attending personal coaching sessions.
Following the above sentiments I consider my academic and practical achievements to be an attest to my high level of motivation and qualifications for becoming a successful graduate of the Master’s degree in International Business and Entrepreneurship. I base this reflection on my track record of successful project work along with relevant work experience within business development at both Logica and Siemens.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing your response.
Sincerely,
I realize it may be asking a lot and you probably get heaps of these, but I'll try my luck anyway.
I am applying for a Master's education starting in September and am writing a letter of intent. However, this is the first time I've ever had to write one of these. I addition, English isn't my first language so I'd really appreciate any and all input, even just a quick glance
Here goes:
Letter of intent
Dear Sir or Madam,
I wish to apply for the Master’s degree in International Business and Entrepreneurship at University of Anonomity. I am applying for this program because I believe it to be an ideal match with my aspirations of pursuing a career within international management consulting and entrepreneurial endeavors. I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
My avid interest in entrepreneurship and management originates with my practical work experience along with working on various hands-on teamwork projects during my studies, acting both as consultant for Danish companies as well as taking on entrepreneurial endeavors. Several of the projects were highly commended by both lecturers and clients, with two of them receiving the mark A+. My academic background counts a Bachelor’s degree in business development from Aarhus University, Denmark, and I am currently pursuing a Master’s degree in technology based business development also at Aarhus University. Both educations have an interdisciplinary character and seek to combine technological insight with business acumen and entrepreneurship to form new business opportunities and processes. On top of my academic achievements I have worked with development of new processes and business initiatives at Siemens Wind Power. Presently I am employed as an intern at Logica IT Consulting, where I function in the role of project manager, charged with marketing planning and strategic proposals for a future business unit. Furthermore, with reference to my CV, I can state that I have strong analytical skills and a logical strain of thought, which enables me to quickly analyze and solve complex and ambiguous problems.
While my academic background provides me with technical and interdisciplinary knowledge fit for a project manager, it lacks dedicated business and entrepreneurial subjects along with cross-cultural competencies. This I why courses like International Entrepreneurship & Innovation, the international management courses along with the International Management Solution project fit perfectly with my aspirations. Furthermore I can personally identify with the programs values, such as personal initiative, responsibility and adapting to your environment, all of which I have actively cultivated by attending personal development lessons and workshops as well as attending personal coaching sessions.
Following the above sentiments I consider my academic and practical achievements to be an attest to my high level of motivation and qualifications for becoming a successful graduate of the Master’s degree in International Business and Entrepreneurship. I base this reflection on my track record of successful project work along with relevant work experience within business development at both Logica and Siemens.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing your response.
Sincerely,
Top answer
Hi; Welcome to the Forums! I like your letter a lot. There is one point where there is a bit of confusion: I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
- Hi; Welcome to the Forums!
- I like your letter a lot.
- There is one point where there is a bit of confusion: I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
- It begins as if you are talking about yourself, when you are really talking about the school.
- Better: I hold this belief in particularly due to the University of Anonomity's hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that it enjoys.
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Hi;
Welcome to the Forums!
I like your letter a lot.
There is one point where there is a bit of confusion:
I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
It begins as if you are talking about yoursel
Welcome to the Forums!
I like your letter a lot.
There is one point where there is a bit of confusion:
I hold this belief in particularly due to the hands-on learning style, international orientation, high international satisfaction rate and the good reputation that University of Anonomity enjoys.
It begins as if you are talking about yoursel
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Hi,
Thanks for you help, it's all valid suggestions and I've already included them!
So the three major fixes you emphasized on looks as such:
Gave an example at the end:
"Several of the projects were highly commended by both lecturers and clients, with two of them receiving the mark A+, including my Bachelor’s thesis. The thesis encompassed a market analysis
Thanks for you help, it's all valid suggestions and I've already included them!
So the three major fixes you emphasized on looks as such:
Gave an example at the end:
"Several of the projects were highly commended by both lecturers and clients, with two of them receiving the mark A+, including my Bachelor’s thesis. The thesis encompassed a market analysis
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