Letter of Intent

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Dear Mr. XXX,

I would like to express my sincere interest to take up postgraduate studies in Master Program in Construction Project Management at AAAA University - BBBB Campus, starting in September 2014. I am currently working as Senior Project Engineer for Envelope Department in CCCC

I found out about your Construction Project Management program after a thorough research on internet and I was immediately attracted by your program for mainly two reasons. Firstly, AAAA University is offering part-time program with sessions in its BBBB Campus suiting perfectly my working hours. And secondly, the taught courses of the program are much related and very specific to my actual work. Furthermore, knowing that AAAA University is ranked 000th in 2013 and in 2014 on the “University League Table”( http://www.thecompleteuniversityguide.co.uk), I believe that AAAA University is one of the best schools I have encountered not only in the UK, but in the region as well.

Since I graduated, I have been working in many big projects and I am aware of the growing global construction industry, particularly in the Middle East and GCC countries, and so is the demand for the qualified project managers in this industry. Looking at the eight taught courses of this program, I strongly believe that in AAAA University I will be able to extend my theoretical knowledge to improve my skills further and to build up a strong foundation for a future career in project management.

I am very grateful for having this chance to apply for postgraduate studies in your university. Given my work experience, I am confident that I am an excellent fit for the program. Obtaining MSc Construction Project Management at AAAA University will provide me with the best possible work conditions that will allow me to achieve the credentials I need to be competitive in the construction industry.

Respectfully,