Letter of expression

Hi,

What do you want to express?

Clive

me and why will I apply this university and why do I want to study there as a master of engineering student

Hi,

OK, I see. That's commonly called a motivation letter.

Try to write something, and we'll help you with it.

Best wishes, Clive

I dont know its name but our professor said its name was letter of expression.

I searched on net but I didnt find anything.

I wrote something but Im not sure about that. I guess, I have grammar mistakes.

Dear Sir/Madam,



I study at ........ University and I have my Junior Degree in chemical engineering department. I am going to graduate in July of 20

Hi,

Here are a few suggestions.

Structure it like an esaay.

Paragraph 1

introduction

say what degree you are applying for

Paragraph 2

Say why you want to do that degree in that field

Paragraph 3

Say why you want to study at that university, instead of others in the USA.

Paragraph 4

conclusion

thank you for your suggestins

I have to write all of these in just one paragraph. Isn't my writing enough or what do you think about that?

Hi,

It's up to you, but most letters of this kind have more than one paragraph. You yourself wrote two.



Your first paragraph begins by focusing on your past history, instead of on your present and future.



In your second, you don't tell me why you want to go to this university rather than any of the other hundreds of universiti

Thanks a lot!

I gonna try to write again

I wrote again. What do you think about that?

DATE



THE UNIVERSITY OF CALIFORNIA, BERKELEY



Dear Sir/Madam,



At first, I was interested in chemistry in high school. After, I began to learn this lesson, I started to like it. We did a lot of experiments individual or with a partner. That is why, chemistry was my favourite lesson. In my

Hi,

Sorry, but this is no better than before.

No educated English speaker would write a letter like this with just one paragraph. And no university would bother to read it. They'd just throw it in the garbage. Do you care about this reality?

You begin by talking about your past history. They don't care about that. They don't care about what you did in high scho