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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

letter of enquiring. Please help correct grammar & choice of words. Thanks



Dear Sir or Madam,



I am hereby to inquiry if there are any available spaces for rent at the City Shopping Mall. I am looking for shops with the sizes between 15 and 20 square meters but if you have other sizes available, other than my preference, please let me know so I can see if it suits my needs. I would also appreciate if you could let me know the prices for the referred sizes and any other costs involved in renting a shop in your mall.



In advance, I thank you for your attention and I look forward to hear from you soon.



Yours truly,


  

Top answer

Not bad at all. I've made a couple of corrections for you. I am enquiring if there are any available units for rent at the City Shopping Mall.

— Nona the brit

  • Not bad at all.
  • I've made a couple of corrections for you.
  • I am enquiring if there are any available units for rent at the City Shopping Mall.
  • I am looking for a shop ideally between 15 and 20 square meters, but if you have other sizes available, please send me the information so that I can see if it would suit my needs.
  • I would also appreciate if you could let me know the price per square meter and any other costs involved in renting a shop in your mall.
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Not bad at all. I've made a couple of corrections for you.

I am enquiring if there are any available units for rent at the City Shopping Mall. I am looking for a shop ideally between 15 and 20 square meters, but if you have other sizes available, please send me the information so that I can see if it would suit my needs. I would also appreciate if you could let me know the price per squa
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