Letter of application

i am writing a motivation letter to apply for a tourism postgraduate programme, can you tell me if is correct and can be a good one? (no longer than one page)
I would like to take part in the International Tourism programme because I am sure it is the right opportunity to achieve my goals in tourism industry and to grow professionally and personally. I graduated in Foreing languages at the University of Insubria in Como with a thesis about the language of tourism. During my previous studies I gained some experience in the field of tourism carryng out an internship in a travel agency for one month, which enabled me to browse a lot of catalogues and see the desire of travel of clientes. Some experiences abroad even if short, have offered me opportunities to adapt to new environments. I have improved my language skylls and I have learned how to be flexible.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Thak you for all who answer me.