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Smi1e Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of application
Hi there people!
I would like to ask for your generosity to look at this letter that I wrote to aplly for a job. Please feel free to correct anything you think that might not be well written as well as the structure.
Thank you.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to apply for the position of Online Sales and Operations Account Manager, as advertised in your Irish website. I believe my profile highly suits the application requirements for this position.
I hold a Bachelor degree in Economics from the University of XXXXXX - (country) After graduation, I attended a Train the Trainers course, a course on Financial Auditing and Internal Control and I studied English at the Cambridge school.
I am currently employed as client financial management at XXXXXX. It has given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career, especially in the area of management for which I have developed a deep interest.
I consider this position at XXXXX would be an excellent opportunity to my professional career in today’s globalized world. The challenge along with the possibility of interacting and learning with highly qualified professionals makes this opportunity into the ultimate learning experience.
I am a dynamic, motivated, organized, responsible and communicative person with good analytical skills.
Please find enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae, giving details of my educational qualifications and work experience. I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfull
PS - I´m sorry, I´m not very good with computers, that´s why the letter isn´t properly processed.
I would like to ask for your generosity to look at this letter that I wrote to aplly for a job. Please feel free to correct anything you think that might not be well written as well as the structure.
Thank you.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to apply for the position of Online Sales and Operations Account Manager, as advertised in your Irish website. I believe my profile highly suits the application requirements for this position.
I hold a Bachelor degree in Economics from the University of XXXXXX - (country) After graduation, I attended a Train the Trainers course, a course on Financial Auditing and Internal Control and I studied English at the Cambridge school.
I am currently employed as client financial management at XXXXXX. It has given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career, especially in the area of management for which I have developed a deep interest.
I consider this position at XXXXX would be an excellent opportunity to my professional career in today’s globalized world. The challenge along with the possibility of interacting and learning with highly qualified professionals makes this opportunity into the ultimate learning experience.
I am a dynamic, motivated, organized, responsible and communicative person with good analytical skills.
Please find enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae, giving details of my educational qualifications and work experience. I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfull
PS - I´m sorry, I´m not very good with computers, that´s why the letter isn´t properly processed.
Top answer
Try being more direct) After graduation, I attended a Train the Trainers course, a course on Financial Auditing and Internal Control and I studied English at the Cambridge school. ) It has given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career, especially in the area of management for which I have developed a deep interest. (Be specific) I consider this position at XXXXX would be an excellent opportunity to my professional career in today’s globalized world.
- Try being more direct) After graduation, I attended a Train the Trainers course, a course on Financial Auditing and Internal Control and I studied English at the Cambridge school.
- ) It has given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career, especially in the area of management for which I have developed a deep interest.
- (Be specific) I consider this position at XXXXX would be an excellent opportunity to my professional career in today’s globalized world.
- The challenge along with the possibility of interacting and learning with highly qualified professionals makes this opportunity into the ultimate learning experience.
- ) Yours faithfull (spelling)
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