0Hi everyone, 02br 00I have drafted up an apology letter, which I was asked to do by my employer. It seems that the internet gets some people into trouble (an no, I wasn't surfing the 'net at work!). What happened is, my employer started using a new software and it has a lot of bugs in it. So to vent my frustration, I decided to start a facebook group. This group featured the name of the product in the title, and was basically there to tell the world that the software was annoying and frustrating. I also posted the logo of said product on the page, which has apparently upset the company that makes the software. It was only ever joined by 4 of my co-workers, and we all forgot it even existed until last week! I have shut the page down and it is gone forever (or so it seems)02br 00I can understand why they are offended, and I also understand why I have been asked to write this letter to apologise, I just don't really know how to say it!02br 00Can someone please review the following letter and let me know if there is any way I can make it sound a little better? Thank you so much!02br 02br 00To the management and staff of x,02br 0100StartFragment00>02br 00I wish to apologise for offending anyone with the groupcreated on the Internet page, Facebook. 02br 00It was created as an inside joke between friends, andwas never intended to offend anyone. It has now been removed.02br 00I would also like to bring to your attention the fact that the groupwas never, in any way, condoned by any of the other staff or management of [my employer]. When it was brought to the attention of management, theyimmediately took action to ensure it was shut down.02br 02br 00This group was not joined by anyone other than the immediategroup of friends who were aware of its’ existence.00 00It was never advertised or promoted in any way by [my employer]. 02br 02br 00Sincerely, 02br 02br 00Me. 02br 02br 00Please let me know what you think!02br 0100EndFragment00>0-
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0aware of 01b 00its02b 00 existence [no apostrophe]02br 02br 00Otherwise it looks ok to me. 0-
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0aware of 01b 00its02b 00 existence [no apostrophe]02br 02br 00Otherwise it looks ok to me.
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