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Situation: Pamela Wilson is a freshman majoring in English. She wants to look for a part-time job to get work experience and earn some extra money, but she does not know what to do, how many hours a week she should work and when to start.

Dear Miss Pamela Wilson,

I am writing on behalf of the Advisory Service in reply to your letter of 20th February, and I would like to congratulate you on passing the entrance exam at University. I totally understand that you are getting trouble with a part-time job, and I hope the following advice below will assist you to make your own decision.

You mentioned that you are a freshman majoring in English and do not know what to do in order to get work experience and earn some extra money for your living. First of all, I strongly recommend that you should apply for English private tutor, which is extremely appropriate with a freshman like you.

Let me reassure you that, with becoming a an English private tutor, not only can you get valuable experiences by knowing how to create class projects, teaching material and handouts for your students, but you can also boost your creative skills and obtain self-esteem in communicating and transmitting knowledge. Moreover, you will be more independent of your parents by getting extra money for living yourself.

In your letter, you also refer to your worries about time planning. I believe that the best course of action would be rely on your learning schedule, so you should begin taking the job after you are stable and get used to with the new living environment. Furthermore, in order to balance between studying and working, the best course of action would be from two to three sessions per week.

You may rest assured that, you will become an organized person with proper organization. Most important of all, you will certainly be well-prepared for your internship in the future by being well-versed in teaching skills.

I would like to wish you good luck with getting a suitable job. Please do not hesitate to contact me again should you have any further questions.

Yours sincerely,
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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Dear Miss Pamela Wilson,

I am writing on behalf of the Advisory Service in reply to your letter of 20th February, and I would like to congratulate you on passing the entrance exam at University. I totally understand that you are getting trouble with a part-time job, (This means she is working in a part-time job, and has trouble with her boss, her tasks, or her colleagues.) and I hope the following advice below will assist you to make your own decision.

You mentioned that you are a freshman majoring in English and do not know what to do in order to get work experience and earn some extra money for your living expenses. First of all, I strongly recommend that you ~~should~~ apply for a job as an English ~~private~~ tutor, (Do you want her to be tutored in English? She will have to pay for her tutor.) which is extremely appropriate with a freshman like you.

Let me reassure you that, ~~with becoming a~~ as an English private tutor, not only can you get valuable experiences (wrong form) ~~by knowing how to~~ in creating class projects, and collecting teaching material and handouts for your students, but you can also use ~~boost~~ your creative skills and obtain self-esteem in communicating and transmitting knowledge. Moreover, you will be more independent of your parents by getting extra money ~~for living yourself~~.

In your letter, you also refer to your worry ~~ies~~ about time planning. I believe that the best course of action would be to look at ~~rely on~~ your class ~~learning~~ schedule. You should start ~~begin taking~~ the job after you are stable and ~~get~~ used to the life of a freshman. ~~with the new living environment~~. Furthermore, in order to balance ~~between~~ studying and working, the best course of action would be from two to three sessions per week.

You may rest assured that, with such a busy schedule, you will become an organized person ~~with proper organization~~. Most important of all, you will certainly be well-prepared for your student teaching ~~internship~~ in the future by being well-versed in teaching skills.

I would like to wish you good luck with getting a suitable job. Please do not hesitate to contact me again should you have any further questions.

Minh Trang Nguyễn Thị · Answer

Dear Ms. Pamela Wilson,

I am writing as a representative of the Student's Advisory Service in response to your letter of 20th February. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on winning a place at University. I comprehend that you having trouble with finding a suitable part-time job; therefore, I hope my advice below will be of some help to you.

In your letter, you mentioned that you are wondering which professions you should choose as a freshman majoring in English with a view to getting work experience and earning money. From my perspective, what kind of part-time jobs you should take depends on your liking and passion. If English is your strong point, the professions relating to teaching and is the best choice for you namely tutor, teaching assistant or even tour guide position is also a clever pick. To get more information, you can look for more jobs on websites or a variety of application on your mobile phone. In general, I strongly recommend that you take the teaching assistant position into consideration.

Let me reassure you that, should you follow this advice, you will obtain many valuable experiences in creating class projects and collecting teaching materials. Moreover, not only will your horizons be broadened and well-versed in teaching skills, as well as communicating with students, but you also become more independent of your parents by getting extra money.

You also refer to your worries about time planning. Your ability, living condition, and interest will be the most important elements for your plan. I would advise you to get a part-time job in the second semester or the second year at University. As you are still new to the surroundings, you should have a profession after you are stable and get used to the new learning environment.

Most important of all, you had better base on your learning schedule to decide the amount of time for working. I believe that the best course of action would be 14 hours per week, it will be an appropriate time for you to adjust your workload.

I reassure you that if you follow this advice, you can balance working and studying. In addition, you also become an organized person with a proper organization.

I would like to wish you good luck with getting a suitable part-time job. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions.

Yours sincerely,
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