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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

letter for school

0Hi, I must write an letter for school to an Canadian Tourist Office. I must write about the following things:02br
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00Who are you and where do you come from?02br
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00What you are planning to do in Canada?02br
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00Where you went on holiday last year and what you did there02br
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00Also about: hotels and wild animals. This is the letter I wrote:02br
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00Visit Canada02br
00PO Box 10102br
00Chard02br
00TA20 9AR United Kingdom02br
00May 19 200802br
00Dear Sir or Madam,00I am Jort Rodenburg and 13 years old. I live in The Netherlands.00 We are going to Canada this summer and planning to do some great things. For example go and sightseeing Calgary, Toronto and Montreal. 02br
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00Last year we went to Zeeland. That is an province in The Netherlands. We saw many things. Stunt flying, dams and the beach. I was wondering if there is any possibility of seeing many things in Canada. But I thought also that I couldn’t see everything because Canada is just huge! 00So, I want some information about the following. Which hotel is the most common for Dutch people? And where can you see things (parks etc.) with wild animals? It would be very helpful if you replied. I hope you can answer my questions.02br
00Yours faithfully,02br
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00Jort Rodenburg02br
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00What do you think about it? Do I have to change something?0-
  

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  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 02span 01b 00May 19 200802b 02br 01b 01span 02span 02b 02br 02br 01span 00Visit Canada02br 00PO Box 10102br 01b 00Chard TA20 9AR02br 00United Kingdom02b 02span 02br 01span 02span 01span 02span 02br 01span 02span 02br 01span 02span 00Dear Sir or Madam,02br 02br 00I am Jort Rodenburg and 01b 00I am02b 00 13 years old.
  • 00 We are going to Canada this summer and planning to do some great things.
  • For example01u 00 go and sightseeing02u 00 Calgary, Toronto and Montreal.
  • 00 02br 02br 00Last year we went to Zeeland.
  • That is 01u 00an02u 00 province in The Netherlands.
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