letter for register my kids in international school

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Hello,i need o write letter for an international school request for register my 3 kids with them thanx

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Mummy Azza · Answer

Dear all,

Please help to give me an advice and correction. Thank you.

Regards,
Azza

Dear Sirs,
We would like to apply for admission for my kids (My Son name is Gaafer studying in Primary 1 @ international school , my daughter is Lamar had a 5 years old and my Son name is Sami had a 4&6 months years old) to your school in 2013.

Sami &Lamar are studying in Baby class at *** kindergarten.

We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. We trust your school can provide good environment for her study here to equip themselves for their future challenges.

Gaafer is an adorable Boy. Honestly speaking, he is not very smart but he is very active and he enjoy almost all activities, he almost gets 100% marks on school’s test.
I tried to call your admission office to ask about more information but she reject my order and ask me to come direct ,
I will appreciate you if inform us if you have available place to my kids (primary 2 , KG 2 and KG1) if it's available when can we come to meet you ?
more over can you please inform us about the school fees and requested documents that you need

Thank you in advance for your hep and we look forward to your positive reply.
Regards

letter for register my kids in international school

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