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Debangkok Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter for my Dean

I wore the suggesttion letter to my old university through my Dean, then he reply my email

I would like to reply his letter, please revise my email for me.

Thank you for your e mail, I am just a old student that would like to see our faculty have beening developed and I also keep track news of our faculty and some time I visit it.

I confident that you are main person to strength the faculty among rapidly change.

Beat regards,
  

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Hi; Here are some suggestions... I wrote a suggestion letter to the Dean at my old university through my Dean , and then he repl ied to my email I would like to reply to his letter, so please revise my email for me. Thank you for your e mail, I am just a old (are you really old - for example 80 years old?

  • Hi; Here are some suggestions...
  • I wrote a suggestion letter to the Dean at my old university through my Dean , and then he repl ied to my email I would like to reply to his letter, so please revise my email for me.
  • Thank you for your e mail, I am just a old (are you really old - for example 80 years old?
  • Use former if you mean that you attended the school in the past) student that would like to see our faculty being have beening developed and I also keep track of news of our faculty and sometime s (one word) I visit the campus it .
  • I am confident that you are main person to strength en the faculty among in these rapidly chang ing times .
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Hi;
Here are some suggestions...

I wrote a suggestion letter to the Dean at my old university through my Dean, and then he replied to my email
I would like to reply to his letter, so please revise my email for me.

Thank you for your e mail, I am just a old (are you really old - for example 80 years old? Use form
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thank you so much for your comment, this is valuable to me.

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